Fall; Piteous Snowflakes

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You've got a really distinct winter voice going on, and the imagery hits that sweet spot between delicate and sharp. The "bleak-bleached snowflakes" paired with those chime-violas pulled me in quick. Then the drop to the stained palms. The red, blue, and black. A lot of the emotional weight settles here nicely with April sealing the close in a soft ache.

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Thank you for the feedback!

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@raw needle hehehe

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Lemme read

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I can feel the softness of the snowflake in the voice😭

The flow is so good omg

Ive missed reading your poems fr

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I like the imagery,the softness,the gentleness and the winterness of it

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