A Recipe to Ward Off Melancholia | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

brisk cave Nov 28, 2025, 8:45 PM

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@void mesa

void mesa Nov 28, 2025, 8:46 PM

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Yk what i love it lol, i will give feedback tmr tho

void mesa Nov 29, 2025, 7:04 AM

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Here’s another Friday feedback with zee….
(delayed version bcs me sick whathehelly )

Now lemme start with i loveeee ittt.
It’s simple but wholesome.
I like how you used (5-7-5)
Syllables count in each stanza.

It’s such Emily ****** kind of work.
The presentation on the other hand is so cute. It was a great choice to write it on paper rather than to just type it because this makes it way more wholesome and evoking.

This deserves more appreciation mischevious_eggos .

Well penned mate 🖊️

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<@&1438560402173857872> here’s your first ever ping give feedback or i whathehelly

brisk cave Nov 29, 2025, 7:07 AM

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void mesa Here’s another Friday feedback with zee…. (delayed version bcs me sick<:whathehe...

i adore you THANK YOU

thin river Nov 29, 2025, 8:07 AM

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YEAYYYYYYY

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Haikuuuzzzz

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Ngl i didn't realise those were haikus until the last line

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So itz gudze le

brisk cave Nov 29, 2025, 8:11 AM

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thin river So itz gudze le

❤️ Thank you so much 🙈

thin river Nov 29, 2025, 9:41 AM

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It feels like a pain killer poem for a bad day

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PERIOD POEMS OMG

molten tartan Nov 29, 2025, 10:51 AM

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I love this poem!! It’s so wholesome melt

hollow valleyBOT Nov 29, 2025, 10:53 AM

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@minor saffron is now following @brisk cave.

#A Recipe to Ward Off Melancholia