Coup de Foudre

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this one caught me smiling like an idiot good one both yahh

[ripe sorrel]

hehe thank youuu credits to him most things were his ideas

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[ripe sorrel]

also so very glad you like itty

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ofc !! its goodd

[ripe sorrel]

#1442037173443362816 could you leave a feedback please

[tame island]

suree lemme go read itt

[ripe sorrel]

thank youuu

[dense stone]

This is soo wholesome! I love this, it’s soo beautiful how you guys potrayed them falling in love and feelings of both sides.. I was smiling the whole timee

[ripe sorrel]

haha thank you so muchhh he's really good at it and he did most parts also really appreciate ittt don't forget to leave a star

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No tags

Wowwwwwwww

This is so amazing

[ripe sorrel]

js follow us instead lolz it would be easier

[ripe sorrel]

thank you so muchhh

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just wanted to say no tags

[ripe sorrel]

oh yeahh that he posted it

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Cause i check always
Ur and yohan's work

[ripe sorrel]

@normal vine

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Btw i was looking forward to this

[ripe sorrel]

awh thanksss I thought u were talking abt pings

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And oh my not disappointed one bit

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[ripe sorrel]

lolz thanksss he's really good it was mostly him

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His limit is the skies not surprised a bit

[ripe sorrel]

reallll

barakallah feehim

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I see what happens when two great artists collaborate lol

[ripe sorrel]

stawpppp das so sweet thank youu

@distant zephyr hi hiii could you leave some feedback

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Knew it its gonna be peak but didn't know it will be a counter convo

Very uniwue

I need to try it out one day

[ripe sorrel]

lolz it was his idea again

[ripe sorrel]

u shuddd

ima be waiting for that

[wraith tree]

He is very unique
When we collaborated
I asked him the length snd he said i can keep writing pretty reliable

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Need to find another poet for that first lolz

[ripe sorrel]

[ripe sorrel]

if u want we could lolz I got nth to do rn

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I wanted to do one with you but i am afraid i will drag u back like i did with yohan

[ripe sorrel]

wdym

huh

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U read the beauty of love right?

[ripe sorrel]

yeah

what abt it

[wraith tree]

Come there i tagged u

[normal vine]

thank u

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@normal vine yo

[normal vine]

thank youu

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thanks for both of u I really appreciate that @ripe sorrel @wraith tree 💗 you're both so kind

[wraith tree]

You are kinder

[normal vine]

you did not bro, you was amazing

and she's so amazing too, I'm sure u both gonna write something great

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yes!

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We half way through
When she comes back it will be done

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Check #1442127795374522368

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mention me to read it when u publish it!

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okay

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Yesss ofc

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@fathom sierra

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damn

this is fire dawg

I read this earlier when nobody pinged me but reading it again, ts so peak dude

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@fervent garnet
would like to hear ur feedback!

[fervent garnet]

Your poem isn't one,
It is a diamond-ed stun,
Which captured mine soul,
Across each and every fold;

In this beauteous piece,
Where there was no ease,
Yet in every word,
There lives a hidden bird;

Which gives me a cute tweet,
Upon this moment, I am beat,

By you people's words

[normal vine]

thank you!

[fervent garnet]

You are most welcome,
For the pleasure is mine

[broken vault]

Yall did great with the back and forth, the simple high school love story is really heartwarming. Good work

[warped orchid]

I approve

I would remove these words though

other than that everything else is good

[normal vine]

thank you!

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@snow depot

[snow depot]

Fire

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@stable tinsel

[stable tinsel]

Beutiful and I remembered my school days with her ❤️

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@potent gull

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@analog dove

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@west pagoda

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@junior palm