#The moon

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I watch the moon, and somewhere inside my quiet chest
I whisper — I want to be like her.
Beautiful without begging, gentle without breaking,
flawed and still glowing like it’s no one’s business but mine.

She isn’t perfect; craters lace her like old heartbreak scars,
but she turns every wound into silver mythology.
No one stands close enough to touch or criticize,
yet everyone stays hypnotized by her radiance.

I want that distance — soft but unapproachable,
close enough to admire, far enough to stay safe;
to float beyond careless hands and cold opinions,
and shine with my flaws, not despite them.

If I could learn her lunar language,
I’d ask how she survives being adored from afar,
how she handles eyes that love the glow
but never the shadows that create it.

Maybe one day I’ll become my own moon —
quietly powerful, beautifully scarred,
loved for everything
they were never able to fix.

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@sleek plover

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Woah

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The third line in the first stanza is so good! Really nice last two stanzas as well, the close is super strong. I think you could cut some filler words and tighten the piece a little, particularly in the second stanza but that is probably just personal preference for writing style. Solid poem overall with a great subject

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Specially art

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Finding perfection in flaws is what this poem is all about 😭😭

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Sadly i dont have any flaws(fixable)

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Haha sureee

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That was a joke i am not a narcissist

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But the people u love accepting you with ur flaws n still finding u perfect is what really matters

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Ikrkrkrkrkrr

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I have
So many more

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So if u eant to give them a read

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Lmk

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Omd tht word narcissist reminds me of the book I was reading yesterday

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It’s so goodddd

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Whenever u feel like sending u can

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Check this one out

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Me and other 2 guys wrote it

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Tyyyy

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I gotchuu

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Where are you from btw

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If u don’t mind sharing

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