#Ancient ancient poem

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spark sleet
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Dug this out of my preteen Google docs journal, dont make fun of him, he is only a child 😂

The weight is immense
The pain is intense
They think just of themselves

I sit and listen
I heal and lessen
But the efforts, all in vain
For the slits across their vein

They think I dont have it,
like I sing a different song
But I just have a net
And it wont hold for long

I try to say
"I hurt too"
But they turn away
And tell me "shoo"

It wont hold
It's getting cold
My net is ripping
My tears are dripping

The pain is transmittable
The thoughts are abominable
They whisper views of envy
I see things, deep in my memory

The victim dies
The child cries
The needle drops
The vinyl pops
And it happens, all again

spark sleet
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@cedar jolt
@white ice

white ice
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Pre teen huh

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Better than my currente

spark sleet
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Definitely not

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"My tears are dripping" thats what tears do, no duh lmaoo

cedar jolt
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i enjoyed the last one too

spark sleet
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I might rewrite it

cedar jolt
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why?

spark sleet
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Just to polish some things. It isnt perfect