#🎼Susurrus of my Chorus🎼

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coarse burrow
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Susurrus is like susuros?

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Also

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Good use of color theory iwth the gold there

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A bit more yellow would make it more noticeable but this is fine

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Very lovey poem

abstract matrix
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a whispering or rustling

coarse burrow
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So yeah

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Susuros

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Its in spanish but yeah

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is her name Brooke

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also really nice and cute poemmm

coarse burrow
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Onety

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coarse burrow
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What i said

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ohh

small sorrel
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real question, wha do you use to edit ya backgrounds

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jk adobe express

small sorrel
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small sorrel
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did u enjoy the poem?

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or didnt read haha

small sorrel
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yea, im re-reading lol

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🥹

small sorrel
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dat boy thirsty?

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want flame

small sorrel
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thirsty for flame

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wait

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oops my mind was in that of another poem

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YES im thirsty

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😭😭😭

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mmm romance i love it

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thank you man

small sorrel
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i just finish a piece myself

abstract matrix
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niceee lemme read it

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also wanna follow each other and become poetry friends?

small sorrel
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😎

small sorrel
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💸

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@abstract matrix is now following @small sorrel.

small sorrel
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idk how to use this bot 😭

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@small sorrel is now following @abstract matrix.

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nvm

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😂

small sorrel
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nvm easy enough

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lol

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haha

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okay let me post this poem i wrote and then ill read urs!

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coarse burrow
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for her

eternal night
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Here’s another Friday feedback with zee……

Well well well

It was a lovely poemmm
Although brook’s admirer is a bit pervert lol.

Ah there’s so much to sayyy..

The medieval presentation
Was top notch i love this kinda work.

The repetition was placed at the perfect spot. The hook of poem was great.

Faded words in the back working like chorus to show inner feelings of writer.

The rhymes are intriguing although there wasn’t a specific rhyme scheme but it was still well put.

It was a great read.
Well penned matee
🖊️

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and yes I'm a pervert

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jk

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listen in old times everything was different for stuff like that

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but it's present times 😈

coarse burrow
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😂

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@velvet remnant

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Hello

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greetings

velvet remnant
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This is romantic, just a question, at the start, it says "beneath the sun that brang it aglow" - think it would be more grammatically correct to say Brought