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your writing style is something which can be seen across your writing
*your writing style
is something which can be seen
across your writing*
- simonghost2
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thank you so muchhh but idk what that means lolz
@spark fox @pine karma @thorn stone
That means that whatever poem you write it follows a pattern
@edgy cargo @random pulsar feedbacks please
ouhhh
I had no idea
thank you so muchhh
most welcome
💐
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@brittle wadi
would appreciate some honest feedbackkk

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@cunning nova
@subtle scaffold thank you for tagging me, appreciate it.
I love the sentiment behind your words, love the style and imagery. Really impressive writing.
thank you so muchh

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dwone

you conveyed your emotions so clearly and the imagery is sooo good im impressed by this oneeee
thank you so very muchhh

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@silver heart @latent niche
I actually read this one out loud loll
thank youu
Ofcc I feel like reading poems out loud has so much... Idk the word... It's just the feeling lol

“i use sarcasm— cause it’s illegal to kill” i like how that opening sets the tone perfectly. yr not hiding ur anger,yr channeling it into words bc actions are off the table. that’s real
@spark fox sorry for the pingss
Hehe all goodies, I’ll get around to reading em all when I can
*Hehe all goodies,
I’ll get around to reading
em all when I can*
- limeske
Their great so I don’t mind
thank you so very muchh
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@signal reef
@true bluff what do u think about this
Oh wait i already read that, I guess I forgot to react-
ouhh
This is my favouriteee🙌🏻
hehehe it was inspired by his bio
Ohhhh

Very bitter, stabs right through the chest. The lines are short and chopped, like it's desperate to get to the heart of the matter
This is an awesome one portraying back and forth conflict, tense and unrelenting honesty 
*I've got shot- each time
I let you in, you left me
to rot, from within. *
- Vinny
why i like the flow and rhythm here
its really smooth and the title is interesting as well
Damnn great work !!!!