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[simple finch]

@soft chasm @balmy phoenix @hazy willow

@formal fulcrum @wooden shell @elfin tide

@agile spear @visual birch @white trail

thank you so muchhh would appreciate if you leave a star

can I tag you in a few other poems

@subtle hawk

[quiet flame]

This poem hit home. This is exactly how I felt on Sunday. Bravo. The personification is what brought this poem to life. Felt it all in my heart ❤️

[simple finch]

awhh giving you hugsss I really appreciate that thank youu may I tag u in some other poems of mine and if you want I'd love to read urs tooo

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[quiet flame]

Absolutely. I'll tag you in the ones I've posted.

[simple finch]

yeshhh thankss

[simple finch]

@ruby moon

[ruby moon]

this piece is crazy good. you took a toxic relationship and didn’t just describe it you dissected it. the way you layered the emotions, the denial, the hurt, the realization… it all hits heavy.

[simple finch]

thank you so muchhh this was me having flashbacks and not being able sleep 🤧🥲

I really appreciate it alll

[ruby moon]

i understand its all so damn tough in the begining but im sure youre in a better place now

i hope you get better and heal

[simple finch]

and for you too

[simple finch]

I know it's js I hate that I can't hate the person yk

[ruby moon]

i know right

[simple finch]

like it's two different ppl that hurt me and I can't think abt the bad guy cuz the good guy stayed for too long

[ruby moon]

you loved them too much to hate them

[simple finch]

REALLLL

like u wanna hate them

but u can't

it's a messed up feeling

[ruby moon]

i know righttt it messes with your head so much

eventually we jus have to get over it

[simple finch]

YESSS THANK YOU FOR UNDERSTANDING AND RELATING

[simple finch]

but how

I don't even know how

ugh

and worst part is

I can't talk to anyone abt it

they don't get it

and others would feed pills

I don't want to keep taking pills all the time

[ruby moon]

hey no thats not the case

i know we've met two mins ago

but you can always text me

ill be there for you

[simple finch]

yeah but I'd feel bad for wasting your time hehe

[ruby moon]

dont say that nooo

[simple finch]

and I don't wanna js dump it all on u

[ruby moon]

thats not wasting time

if it makes you feel better and lighter

then id want to do it too

youre never alone

[simple finch]

can I dm u

[simple finch]

and u too

[ruby moon]

ofc you can

hehehe

[formal fulcrum]

“i hate that he was once kind.” god that line is so brutally honest. it’s easier to hate a monster...it’s sm harder when yr haunted by the good memories, the soft moments that make the hurt so confusing🥹 this is so relatable. “i was paper he crafted me, ruined me- crumbled me- folded me into things, i wasn’t supposed to be.” shiii this metaphor is devastating. u can feel the shaping, the bending, the loss of urself in his hands. and the worst part? u trusted him to hold you “and it’s true- i fell for the lies i’m the fool” the way you turn the blame inward here is heartbreaking. so many of us do that we replay what we should’ve seen, what we should’ve done, as if we were the ones holding the match. and hey it’s okay that it still hurts. that doesn’t make you weak it makes u real. you loved, you trusted, you were open. he’s the one who failed to handle ur heart with care. n ur not a fool. yr someone who believed in another person. and one day, that courage to love will be a gift you give to someone who knows how to hold it

[balmy phoenix]

This was... No words.. You've done it again lol

[simple finch]

oh.. my.. eyes..

💗 🫶

[simple finch]

thank youuuu

[balmy phoenix]

Ofcc no need to thank me <33

[simple finch]

@fading yew @dreamy hollow

[simple finch]

@grizzled gulch

@vocal summit

[simple finch]

@versed frigate

[versed frigate]

That's so goodd!!! 👏

[steady wigeon]

Wonderful! @versed frigate has just progressed to level 7!

[versed frigate]

I love that feeling so much

[simple finch]

thank youu

[simple finch]

what feeling

[versed frigate]

i dont know how to call it its just the vibe

[versed frigate]

ofcc

[simple finch]

but it's pain so I'm confused

[white trail]

'folded me into things, I wasn't meant supposed to be. But I let him...'

[agile spear]

I am a little confused about this line
I let him water me,
he starved me too.

are you sure you mean to use starved because starved is used in case of food not water else the entire poem is epic as always

[simple finch]

ouhh sorry mistake fixed it and thank youu

[simple finch]

will listen to this later

[agile spear]

It's okay since it's your poem you have creative liberty

[simple finch]

yeshh but thankss

[agile spear]

Most welcome, :) nice poem btw

[simple finch]

thanksss

[simple finch]

@idle canopy feedback please

@elfin knoll hii could you leave a comment

@flint anchor

[flint anchor]

@simple finch damnnn see this is what I was talking about I would've cursed myself for missing this out

It's so sad and really relatable id say the dilemma the emotions behind it
Loved it

[simple finch]

🥹 🫶

THANK YOUU

[subtle hawk]

Enough to make a grown man cry

Thats poetry right there.

Its beautiful

You are beautiful

[simple finch]

thank you so muchhh I really appreciate it all and you are beautiful tooooo this made me so so happyy

[subtle hawk]

https://tenor.com/view/thumbs-up-good-job-ok-okay-fine-gif-12093992730491105359

Ofc your welcome

[simple finch]

@young egret feedback please

@dry scaffold hoiii could you leave a feedback

@cyan cloak

[simple finch]

@supple vale

sorry for so many pings

@pliant moth

[simple finch]

@glossy glade @stuck falcon

[glossy glade]

The poem feels grim
I like the metaphors it's easy to digest
Because it represent the feeling very well

Also dang you got so many poem

[simple finch]

thank you so muchh

[simple finch]

I have been writing lolz

sorry for the trouble

[glossy glade]

Nah its fine

[simple finch]

thanks

[glossy glade]

I should get back to writing

[simple finch]

ooo what are u working on

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@simple finch is now following @glossy glade.

[glossy glade]

Anyway i ma continue reading the rest
Tho i might not have much to say for all of em

[simple finch]

it's alrighttt

[glossy glade]

Rn ?
Emm
I have a draft of a poem
Titled
Daily Necromancer
Or
A Daily Life of a Necromancer

Its still a jumbled mess rn

[simple finch]

lolz oooo wots a necromancer

[simple finch]

can't be that bad

I'll look forward to reading ittt

[glossy glade]

Its emm kinda like a magician that uses dark magic to bring the dead back to life kinda thing

[simple finch]

WOAH-

das cool

[simple finch]

@south sinew

[pliant moth]

How do u find so many ppl to tag 😭

[simple finch]

<@&1145760802666717234>

[simple finch]

I'm sooo sorry you remembered it I feel bad I hope you're doing okay and omg 17 years ago??? I'm really really really sorry and no THANK YOU SO MUCH the fact you even read it twice and beared with the pain

[simple finch]

@stiff mortar @jagged grotto

[idle canopy]

oh the juxtaposition used throughout is amazing :D

[simple finch]

thank you so muchhh could I tag you in a few other poems of mine

[simple finch]

@supple bronze

[idle canopy]

Thank you for the offer but its okay ^^

[simple finch]

yeshh thankss I'd love to read some of ur poems if u like

[simple finch]

@solid mural

[simple finch]

@novel oak

[novel oak]

This is reallyyy good bro the paper analogy is so apt and well thought I just think" caused theft " in the 4th stanza can be replaced with something else maybe "commmited theft"?

[simple finch]

oh yeahhh thank you so muchh

[novel oak]

My pleasureee

[simple finch]

thank you so muchh it's much smoother now

[novel oak]

It's my pleasuree gurl 🫂

[dry scaffold]

who in the hell

[dry scaffold]

on what poem?

my bad i didnt think anybody would actually ping me

yk what, i aint no good poet myself but theres a really good base for this to expand. solid foundation, i liked that u stirred away from the normal kinda cliche-ish bit, all in all its a bop. the rythm is there, very off putting and agitating, i like it, the rhyming too. it just goes and goes and then WABAP. i liked the interpratation and how vague? not vague but a sorta, ion know how to explain it but its a bop

[simple finch]

lolz we texted on dead poets society once

[simple finch]

it's alright

[simple finch]

u are very good at poetry lolz and thank youu I really really appreciate ittt