#Polyphonic Reverie of the Devouring

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stray musk
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The floor sighs,
viscous, tremulous, beneath your weight
a gelatinous dirge
that cannot, will not abate

The walls exhale, undulate, breathe, then convulse
their hollows filled with whispers of absent pulse

You step, though your feet are no longer your own
each tendon, each ligament dissolving to bone

The ceiling drips obsidian, molten, malevolent
fractured eyes blinking
in rhythms belligerent

A thousand voices scrape inside your auditory cortex
clawing, gnawing at cognition
with mordant perplex
Their timbre tastes of copper, decay, and flame
each syllable a serrated echo of your name

Mirrors bloom like virulent flowers of glass
reflections liquefy, your features fracture and pass
Your own visage twists, folds, bifurcates
smiles at you with malice, insinuates, manipulates

A hand, your own, yet unclaimed, slides through your sternum
coiling, pressing, unraveling marrow in delirium

Your pulse staggers, arrhythmia of dread and dismay
breath coalesces into shadow, exhales into clay

Children, innumerable, crawl and proliferate
velvet masks hiding their predatory gait
They press their fingers against your temporal lobe
murmuring truths that bleed from your soul’s robe

The ceiling fractures, the floor crescendos, ascends
up and down annihilated
spatial logic suspends

The air thickens, tangibly acrid, viscous with sound
your senses unmoored
each inhale unsound

Time disintegrates into an ouroboric spiral
a self-consuming coil of terror and denial
Corridors fold back upon themselves
devouring every whisper, every scream that delves

The voice you hear is the marrow of your being
it bends your tongue, ossifies your seeing
It hums of love, it hums of shame
folds your consciousness into its claim

Shadows slither, insinuate beneath your epidermis
caressing sinew, dissolving your verisimilitudes
They taste your tears, they consume your hope
they hum in polyphonic harrowing, unropeable scope

Mirrors bleed, liquids bloom in iridescent grotesquery
hands of glass, fingers bifurcated, teeth in jeopardy
Your reflection proliferates, fractals of despair
each one gnawing, leering, gnashing where you stare

Children hum in cantillations of shattered bone
their laughter a ligature, a gnawing monotone
They press, they fold, they gnash, they lick
each pulse a malediction, each blink a crucifix

Your body distends, contracts, divides
your shadow hums, duplicates, derides
The air is molten, then crystalline, then void
your sinews unravel, your neurons destroyed

Time bleeds, folds, coagulates, fractures
your cognition reels in obfuscatory raptures
A shadow presses through the vestibule of your mind
coaxing, caressing, reshaping the sinews it finds

A thousand children, faceless, crawl and leer
their voices hymnal, their intent austere
They taste your marrow, they hum your shame
they fold existence into their acrid claim

Mirrors fold like tectonic plates of flesh
walls pulsate, insinuate, convulse afresh
You attempt to wake, yet wake is dissolved
your essence folded, mangled, and wholly absolved

The nightmare coils, fractals inside your cortex
its velvet hands consuming, molding, complex
Your breath is shadow, your pulse is a drum
each heartbeat an elegy for what’s to come

Figures loom, stretch, bifurcate and consume
their velvet fingers etch your neurons like runes
They hum of love, they hum of dread
folding eternity into the emptiness in your head

You are both victim, vessel, and predator
a cathedral of horror in psychotropic specter
The ceiling is liquid, the floor is a scream
every shadow the incarnation of a fractured dream

Time coils inward, outward, a Möbius of despair
your eyes, your tongue, your hair dissolve in the air
The children hum, the shadows hum
and everything folds into the infinite drum

You are the nightmare, the nightmare is you
your chest coils, your mind distills, your soul accrues
The floor is molten, the ceiling bleeds
and air hums in polyphonous, infinite needs

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You reach for warmth, for reason, for light
your hands dissolve, your thoughts ignite
The nightmare hums, the mirrors twist
folding every sense into obsidian mist

A hand, your own, yet alien, presses to your face
humbling, coercing, tracing your grace
Love is terror, it whispers in a serrated tone
love folds the marrow, and makes it your own

You scream, you shatter, you fray, you melt
the nightmare hums, unrelenting, unfelt
It coils, it folds, it hums once more
a Möbius of horror, a psychotropic chore

And then, at the core of your unraveling mind
you understand with clarity both cruel and kind
The nightmare has no end, the nightmare has no start
it is the echo of all that devours your heart

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stray musk
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@river mirage @hushed grove @crisp terrace

rigid karma
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Why this long? It's like reading Woodsworth

stray musk
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@distant dirge@royal tartan @shrewd vessel

stray musk
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distant dirge
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that title alone

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THIS IS A MASTERPIECE

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I DON'T NEED TO SAY ANYTHING ANYMORE

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THIS IS ART

stray musk
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I worked very hard on it lol

shrewd vessel
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I'm speechless -

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This is so damn good like so gooodddd

stray musk
stray musk
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@quaint nacelle

quaint nacelle
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I love the wording & the theming very much <3

stray musk
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Thank youu I worked way too hard on the words lmao

stray musk
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*Yeah lol most

of my poems are in that

style ig :P*

modest wave
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You reminded me of what i need to put in my poems

stray musk
stray musk
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Well glad I helped in a way

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slow pulsar
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this is one of your best pieces I have read I absolutely love this one

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applause applause

stray musk
drifting tangle
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Unfortunately I don’t have time to read the whole thing because I’m about to head into work, but god damn

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I think that’s probably one of the best poems I’ve ever read, I mean it

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Feeling really inspired even after reading a small portion of it

stray musk
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I deeply appreciate the feedback <3