To the ones who

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@sturdy maple

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i think its rlly good except for a couple of grammar mistakes, but that's prob because we're from different countries

but i really love it

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yerr and thanks again I'm glad you like themm

[lean holly]

I really love how you always end the poem with a beautiful stanza that just gives hope and often makes the point of the poem very strong

[hard jackal]

Very well done, geat jobbb

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thank youu is it okay if I ping you in some other poems as well

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thank youu

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Ofcc ofcc

Heyy if you have a sec, can ya give me some feedback on my poem :P

[lean holly]

sure no problem

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ofccc I was in class and I js got back I'll read if it's not too long cuz its getting pretty late

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thank youu

[hard jackal]

Uhhh it's long lmfao

Had to put the rest in comments..

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then tmrrr but I can't wait to read ittt

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Ooopsiess

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it's okayy

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Lol alrr

Tyy

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there's tmrr

don't mention itt

[hard jackal]

Okieee

[lean holly]

most welcome, you are a budding poet and I appreciate art

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*most welcome, you are

a budding poet and I

appreciate art*

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[stiff vine]

I liked most of it but not the end. I very much did not like the end.

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can I ask why

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@calm plaza

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to the ones who get lost..?

I like this poem btw its touching its nice and many ppl need to hear this

Oh nvm forget about what I said I think its grammatically correct

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huh

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thank youu

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@stone furnace

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Bravo bravo

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thankss

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@ruby cairn

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thank you so muchh

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@tall cedar

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"And maybe you don't have..
to do this alone.
Just give me a call,
and I'll pick up the phone. "

PERFECTTT

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thank youu I'm glad you like itt

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awhhh thank you so muchhh and your voice is so beautifulll I'm glad you liked itttt

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@gritty tartan

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Awwww you are the one who must be thanked

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awhhh thank you thank youu

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Yea that was about to steal a tear from mui eyes

Thank you it was beautiful

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awhhhhhh

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thank you so very very veryyy muchh

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@lone estuary harsh criticism?

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Damnnnn

This is soooo gooodddd

I love the rhyme of ur not alone at the ened

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thank you so muchhh

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