#You Were Never Mine

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A poem written from a male perspective — 🫴🏻

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@blazing bane @urban geyser @green island

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@winter bone @cold dagger @fallow quest

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@opal ingot @dire thorn @leaden sapphire

cold dagger
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as a male

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i wrote someething but it got deleted

blazing bane
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woahh

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it's really good

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I feel like you could try some othe words to replace cuz man was repeated twice in the same stanza to rhyme and mind too

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but other than that it's amazing

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js my opinion btw I'm no professional

cold dagger
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i said that it is perfect

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from a males perspective

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cold dagger
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youre welcome

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@silent frigate

silent frigate
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<@&1145760802666717234>

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@obtuse atlas

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@flint dust

obtuse atlas
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Omg!! That first line , it's a chef's kiss, the whole poem is so in flow, I loved it so much, where were you before, why I haven't found you before... But anyways now I did, it's a request, do always tag me whenever you write a new poem 😄💖

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@hybrid mesa

hybrid mesa
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I am impressed by the diction and tone..

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Have you considered publishing??