@rough yacht @uncut patio @upper trout
#Beneath the Tide
grave sundial
grave sundial
@digital ore @rancid magnet @winter smelt
grave sundial
That was Fantastic!
Would be happieee if u give star 
grave sundial
How old are you moonlight?
17 
upper trout
17 <:blanket:1222160742510362655>
No wonder, your words are beautifully melancholic
grave sundial
No wonder, your words are beautifully melancholic
Thank you so much and how old are you probably older ig
winter smelt
everyone is a baby here
upper trout
nooo
upper trout
everyone is a baby here
i wouldnt say everyone
grave sundial
@true pond
winter smelt
This is quite delicate, it kinda feels a bit of early Plath, and I enjoy the swaying rhythm that it had, and how cohesive it is. if I had a comment it would be to bring up the theme of the ocean tides a bit early on or make it more integral to the whole poem more. but generaly this is nice; great job and contiue to write, I would like to see more of your future stuff.
grave sundial
This is quite delicate, it kinda feels a bit of early Plath, and I enjoy the swa...
Thank youuu 
@clever condor @agile raft
@near vine
agile raft
Consolidation with the self
The author's intention is quite simple
That write as messy, chaotic and yet imitating flow
Which crash but it's doesn't destroy or create
It's just stay, Just remains there without any action
And yet carries and influence
winter smelt
Consolidation with the self
The author's intention is quite simple
That write ...
where are you people spawning from </3
agile raft
where are you people spawning from </3
What you mean
winter smelt
What you mean
dw abt it
digital ore
You can see the vastness of someone's 'ocean' and yet only dive so deep
uncut patio
this needs to be on the starboard
grave sundial
this needs to be on the starboard
thank you
gritty urchin
