Long Goodbyes

[haughty pilot]

Whispered echoes of shades long passed
Bury the angel, stain the glass

Left behind to find my way
Convincing lies that I'm okay

Empty silence, all my hours
Unkempt grave, windswept flowers

-# (Please feel free to give any feedback you can think of, in depth as you can! I want to hear it all, I'm a beginner author and I'm trying my hardest to get better, so please don't hold back!)

[alpine swan]

This is absolutely incredible

[heady sail]

Wonderful! @alpine swan has just progressed to level 2!

[alpine swan]

I love that it rhymes

[hot urchin]

quite excellent

[haughty pilot]

Aw, thank you so much, that means a lot to me!