Set Me Free

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[pearl nymph]

It's really good, your poem reminds me of the song 'set me free' I was just listening, anyways you have beautifully crafted this piece, keep writing, well done 👍

[shy canyon]

ty

[strong isle]

This is really fantastic you should be really proud of your poetry. I especially like how you where able to use such captivating words to really bring the readers attention to you literature. 👍🏽👍🏽

[shy canyon]

thank youu

[strong isle]

Your welcome hope you have a very good day

[shy canyon]

you too ❤️

[near wyvern]

I really like how you wrote it all in short sentences

[shy canyon]

ty

[opal spindle]

reading this make me feel good idk how but its nice..

[shy canyon]

love that it made you feel something

[daring bridge]

“know me, love,
loathe me free”
I love that

[shy canyon]

thankss

[shy canyon]

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[glossy turret]

damn. this is hella deep sad bro. amazing work. the emotions oozes out the poem in a way that it's makinh the readers feel it too, immersive pain. i love the typography also, nice touch over there. and also I love how you were able to make make it short but lyrical and i think that's what make the poem stand out for me. overall, this is amazing and love it and i will be reading it again.

[shy canyon]

tyyy

[nova salmon]

'loathe me free' - this line hits so hard for me

[graceful drum]

The last stanza just... hits real>>>