Flying..

[dim nimbus]

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[near acorn]

This is a really emotional read. The only suggestion I have is to use punctuation, just allows the reader to comprehend your poem in the way you want us to, unless you want the poem to be read through interpretation rather than structure. Overall, really good poem !

[rapid sequoia]

ty

[thorny snow]

This poem is very sad

I love it

[rapid sequoia]

ty assassin

[ancient thicket]

This is one of the best pieces I've read on this app! Wonderful work with rhyming and imagery. The way the story goes is phenomenal and emotional

[rapid sequoia]

ty

[cobalt pine]

Woahhhh

Good jobbb

[rapid sequoia]

tyy

[cobalt pine]

Ofcc ofcc

[hexed kernel]

damn this is great, really missed my mum <\3 shes alive but we don't live together, also your rhymings are pretty good too