Foolish me

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extremely vivid poem, loved it

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@runic wave

here

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hello

hello

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hi hii

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gimme a min ill read <3

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💐

[runic wave]

this is really nice
I can feel the heartbreak and the depth is good

about the "now hes gone, yet he left his scars"
what about "now hes gone, yet i bore his scars" ?
which seems more poetic, asking cos im a beginner in poetry haha , you seem like a v nice writer

I mostly write short stories

recently ive been wanting to get into poetry tho

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awh thank you I'm still trying and you seem like you know what you're talking abt

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ooo can I read some please

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hehe <3

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I'll be looking forward to it thenn

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oh wait lemme find one

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yeshhh okey

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ill dm it to you?

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I don't mind

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okaii

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@sour marten feedback please

[sour marten]

And I’m here, learning to love,
Even though I fear —
For people visit the ocean,
And learn to dive despite their fear.

They surf the waves the ocean rages,
Trying to overcome its tides.
And I keep failing — yet I’m trying —
To dive right into his heart,
Even after it tore me apart.
( “Your last piece was so raw and beautiful, it inspired me to write this from my own perspective.”)

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awhhh omg you should write a poem for ittt I'd love to readdd and thank you so much please leave a star

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Suree if i would i will ✨

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@vital igloo

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Wow

Compelling

applause lol

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lolz thank youuu

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Ofc ofc

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@timid dove

hereee

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Girl, girl, girl, this is so good

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so glad you like ittt thank youu 💗

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@trim pumice would appreciate if you could leave a comment

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@crimson rock

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how much pain this one poem has like immeasurable

just beautiful

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thank you so muchh

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@keen swallow

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@short berry

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@atomic scroll

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Absolutely beautiful poem its so deep and heartbreaking at the same time

ugh its so good

I'm looking forward to collabing with you if youre open for it sometime in near future

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OMG YESHHH DAT BE AWESOMEEE

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awhhh thank youu

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@charred jackal

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@icy zenith

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@frozen bloom

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aw thank you and I'm sorry it didn't work out and funny thing is this wasn't like abt losing a romantic lover or smth lolz hehe but thank youuu and you deserve better I hope you meet thatt

and you seen like a fun person to talk too

[crimson rock]

just pure magic I have no words left to appreciate it now :) pure bliss

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I really really really appreciate itttt

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@urban glen

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Damnnn can't imagine how well I can relate
😭
The fear
The confusion
The separation
It's heartbreaking

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OMG U TOO?? I HOPE YOU'RE HEALINNN AND THAT THINGS GET BETTER

[urban glen]

🫂 🫂

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@rose monolith

@gentle needle

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@reef rivet @knotty panther

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your rhymes are so flowy its like water running out a facette

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that's so sweet of you to sayyy thank youu

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your welcome!!

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@undone magnet

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[rose monolith]

daaang very emotional

I'd say get back tg

jk but very nice story and flow and melancholic romance poem

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👀

did u mean together

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erm it's not romance lolz but I see why it seems like that hehe

😅

[rose monolith]

tg mean together for me

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I mean like I see it as romance cuz I understand the meaning

but it's not technically romance

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yeshh and weird cuz de guy was like not lile

like idk

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yeshh

not romance at all

it would be really weird if u knew which role the guy played in my life so

we not gonna use the word romance lolz

but thanks a lotttttt

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what? 😭

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oopsie poopsie

I'm not good with emotional or confessional poems

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it's okayyy

lolz

I bet everyone who read this poem thought the same

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aw dang I'm sorry to hear that

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😭

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don't beee

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I shall

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😅

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btw tell me what u think of the sensitive poemm

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@pliant charm

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@acoustic mirage

[acoustic mirage]

I love the red wine callback at the end it ties everything together 💗