The train

[turbid adder]

The train will catch up to you
Whether you run or not
While you live
It moves ever closer
While you forget it’s there
It moves ever closer
While you sleep
It moves ever closer
And you’re on the tracks
Whether you run or not
You will die

The concept of nothing is terrifying
So we invent gods in the sky promising paradise
To not break down
We need to believe there’s more

A part of me just believes the inevitable nothing
But to survive
I tell myself there’s so much we don’t know
There could be more
There could be

I don’t want to disappear
But the tracks are vibrating
Ever closer
And nothing can stop it

[verbal coral]

absolute miracle

[verbal coral]

What is this poem about tho?

It's amazing but I am not sure about the theme of it and what it's trying to convey

[turbid adder]

I was writing about death, trying to write about my feelings around death and afterlife and the inevitability of it , I’m glad you like ittt yay thank you so much

[verbal coral]

I was getting a hint it is death

but thought to make sure it is death

[verbal coral]

It's amazing to think about death tbh how everything ends and nothing is left

Just memories of you in those who still remain

[turbid adder]

Well I suppose it could be applied to different things which I think is nice

[verbal coral]

a poem having multiple meaning makes it soo much better

[turbid adder]

Yes I agree

[verbal coral]

That is an amazing poem you have there keep making such masterpieces loved it !