Missing piece

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[north vale]

@grizzled light

[latent sapphire]

I actually really like this one you did really good!!

[ripe ridge]

a job well done! this is such a cute poem

[north vale]

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[peak cliff]

Damnnn

that's so damn lovely poem

[sonic hazel]

Holy wow that was great, I love this!!

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@sonic hazel is now following @north vale.

[livid cairn]

"If kindness were a leaf,
I'd give you a tree.
If your smiles are worth a breath,
you'd have me.

If your eyes were a star,
in them I'd see a galaxy. "

these are ma fav lines, absolutely cooked with this one. love ittt!
(o yeh welcome back! haven seen u ina while)

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@north vale is now following @sonic hazel.

[north vale]

@eternal belfry could you leave a comment?

[eternal belfry]

Absolutelyyy the second para is just 😭✨✨

[north vale]

awh thank you

@raven rapids

[north vale]

@thick sun

[thick sun]

I love how your poems, (the ones I've read) are all around love and waiting lol

Mine are all dark n stuff 😭

[north vale]

lolz only few isn't abt it

[thick sun]

Nice to apprectiate different artwork, that's fs

[north vale]

it's still gud thooo

[thick sun]

Loll nice

[north vale]

I did post one on sensitive

[thick sun]

Tyy

[north vale]

but idk abt dat..

if u wanna read I could ping u tho

[north vale]

🫶

[thick sun]

Yeahh ofc! The only reason that I wouldn't wanna get pinged is if I'm like suuuper flooded with notifs, though even then, I'd still check it out

So you don't gotta ask dw

[north vale]

understandable lolz

[north vale]

awhhh das too kind of u

[thick sun]

Nuuu I actually enjoy reading your work loll

[north vale]

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⠀⠀⠀ヽ つ＼⠀ ／
⠀⠀⠀ UU⠀/ 🎀 \

to de lady who made my day

[thick sun]

Aweee

Anytime, you're so sweet ฅᨐฅ

Tysm!!

Now you made my day loll

[north vale]

@gray rain feedback?

[gray rain]

This is really good!!! The first part of the poem hits deep, keep it up!😁

[cerulean raven]

*This is really good!!!

The first part of the poem

hits deep, keep it up!😁*

- beefstew971

[north vale]

yeshhh cuz it's trueee and you could be a gift to so many ppl and not know

@velvet solar feedback please

[north vale]

@fickle oak

[north vale]

@honest seal feedback please

[honest seal]

it's good
when you really read it
you can also read it like an song (fun fact)

[velvet solar]

Who be you?

[north vale]

I be nobody, who you?

[velvet solar]

Just dont know why ya tagged me

[north vale]

simply wanting a feedback so um could you?

[velvet solar]

Yea but why did you tag me specifically?? Not annoyed just curious

[north vale]

you're the chosen one
|| idk what I'm saying I'm js joking around and I saw ur reply to some poems and thought of tagging u no special reason buh u special ||

[velvet solar]

Oh lol if I get time to read it. Im busy for the next 14 or so hours with school and other stuff

[north vale]

ouhh okey good luck with all that Sir or ma'am

[urban heart]

Wonderful! @north vale has just progressed to level 23!

[north vale]

🫡

[velvet solar]

Non-bianary. They/them. Think of me more as an object than a person. Asteria

[north vale]

what is Asteria

[velvet solar]

Me.

[north vale]

okay so can I call u Asteria

nice name btw

[velvet solar]

Yes but remember its more in an object way than a person. But yes

[north vale]

what object are you? Sorry it js made me curious

[velvet solar]

Asteria. Its a long story. Just for instance how i use to describe it is like when people ask me how im doing its not "how are you" its more like "how is asteria" third person. Like talking about a rock.

[north vale]

okey Asteria but know to me you're better than a rock

[velvet solar]

Yah

But as I said its not you're its asteria is better than a rock in that example, make sense?

[velvet solar]

If not I can explain further

[north vale]

Asteria is better than a rock

[north vale]

okay

[velvet solar]

Yah

[north vale]

yeshh

[north vale]

@hidden fulcrum

[hidden fulcrum]

but you never see.

That the love you give
has now created a sea.

these 3 lines are sooo beautiful they truly have the soul captured

[north vale]

I really appreciate it Im glad you like itt

[north vale]

@bitter talon

||sorry for all the pings||

[bitter talon]

I LOVE IT

[bitter talon]

All good lol

[north vale]

I'm gladd

[north vale]

@compact depot

@soft umbra

[north vale]

@slender thicket

@tepid arrow

[north vale]

@warm bluff

[north vale]

@marsh steppe

[north vale]

awhh thank youu

[north vale]

@pure monolith

[pure monolith]

So kind 😭 ❤️

[north vale]

js the truth ppl don't believe

[urban heart]

Wonderful! @north vale has just progressed to level 24!

[north vale]

@placid temple

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@placid temple is now following @north vale.

[placid temple]

im just gonna read this one included with the other for tn if thats okay?

[north vale]

ofccc

thank youu

[placid temple]

woah woah

okay listen

im very picky in my poetry

and its not often i smile from lines of a poem

only like pixbo, light, and edgar allan poe has made me done that i can remember tbh

but "If kindness were a leaf / I'd give you a tree" made me smile

damn good

[north vale]

THANK YOU SO VERY MUCHHHH OH MAH GAAAHHH I CAN'T BELIEVE MA POEM MADE SOMEONE SMILEEE THANK YOUU

coughs I mean it's whatever I appreciate it ig

@mighty frost

[mighty frost]

KAHAHAHAH LOL

[north vale]

[mighty frost]

WOAHHH

This one is rly good

[north vale]

thank youuu

honestly inspired by a Pinterest poem lolz

[mighty frost]

Lol

I'd say it reminds me of waves but idk

[north vale]

oooo

that's nice

[north vale]

@quiet star @past narwhal

[past narwhal]

hehe I love this one its so ah love I LOVE your metaphors on LOVE

[north vale]

AWHHHH THANK U SO MUCHH

[north vale]

@shadow nova hi hii could you leave a feedback

@wide needle

@brave hound

would appreciate a feedback

||also can't wait to read all ur poemsss||

[brave hound]

A touching message with great execution! nice use of rhyme and punctuation. maybe play around with line separation but overall, a wonderful piece

[north vale]

thank you so muchh

[shadow nova]

This is so genuinely wonderful

Thank you for writing it, I can really appreciate it’s meaning

Nothing really to say, I love it

[north vale]

awhh thank you so very muchhh can I ping you in some other poems of mine?

[shadow nova]

Yeah that would be great, thank you

[north vale]

no thank youuu 💐 ||it's a lot of pings so sorry||

[north vale]

@strange sun for u hehe

hope u like this one

[strange sun]

I love this it's a really fresh theme it's been a while since I've read anything like this 🤌