out of control written by t.a. ᓚᘏᗢ (claishy)

[spark geode]

I'm planning to be active here by posting my own poems; you're welcome to use them for inspiration! Copyright © 2025

Reversing the ticking clock.
Lucid dreaming to the time when I’m awake.
“Fly far away…” Running from reality.
So inhumane, how foolish can you be?
I’m used to it.
Put the blame on me,
Blame me as you please.
What’s the problem?
Funny enough—can even somebody solve it?
So inhumane, do your tears exist?
Mistakes as you’ve said, blame…
Put the blame on me… 
In this horizon.

4.15 ~ 3.11.2025
out of control written by t.a.```

[violet ivy]

To blame and shame?
No, I refuse that game,
Those gambits to reframe.
Tragic as we are; sheltering from afar.
Watching those horizons align; filtering our feeling so sublime.
This may be no solution,
Nor an aim for salvation,
But an appreciation...
For that burdened reclamation...

(Sorry got poetic...)

It is a really good poem and it sucks that people pass the blame and such... I hope whatever prompted you to write this passes by swiftly.

[stone knot]

"lucid dreaming to the time when i’m awake." this is such a sharp way to describe dissociation. yr conscious, but not really here. yr dreaming while ur eyes are open. "so inhumane, do your tears exist?" man that question is cold and devastating. it’s not even anger..it’s disbelief. yr wondering if their remorse is even real, or just another performanc

[spark geode]

I'm so happy that my poem inspired you to write a poem ✨
Thank you for reading - Yes, it's awful, but others shouldn't feel the same way.

[spark geode]

You understood really well what I was trying to capture and tell in the poem!
Thank you for reading my short poem 🙇‍♀️ ✨

[feral pine]

@past flax is now following @spark geode.

[somber needle]

I like the voice here, it's accusatory only to offer shifting the blame on you/the writer. It's dances a fine line between accusation and resignation. the direct comparison alone 'how foolish can you be?' - then - 'I'm used to it'

[spark geode]

it's pretty short but im glad my poem reached you - i appreciate your thoughts!

[elder drift]

wow, this poem is so beautiful. each turn and lines intertwined together yk. amplifies that emotions and makes the poem hit much more

Thank you for sharing this