#ill make my own closure

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shy bay
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i want to hear my childhood laughter
once again before the unknown after
the hereafter is the part where you accept what is eternal
the part where im whispered answers i thought i needed internal

i hope its like being held in arms otherworldly delicate
i hope ill become a tree or some sort of significant element
id like to be carried to the gates that shimmer
yield from the end that feels whole and
i hope i get the serenity i was promised in the life they stole

placid slumber, the repose in the respite
except for once i am not temporary
i wont have to think about tomorrow
maybe this is the end of the everlasting sorrow

autumn auroraBOT
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shy bay
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torn kindle
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imsntitktthtutbtktignprormskei

harsh aspen
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Its great, the way u started it w nostalgic vibes n sorrow, the visuals are ethereal lowk

hexed stumpBOT
harsh aspen
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But sometimes the lines feel uneven or slightly long, i mean, poems dont need to be perfectly rhyming but keeping it a little smoother helps the emotions be a lil moe vivid or atleast for me

shy bay
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thanks

shy bay
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and i think in a world of people who prefer to be flaweless and perfect i have to show that we werent born perfect if that makes sense

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but thank you