＊*•̩̩͙✩•̩̩͙*˚ 𝓢𝓽𝓪𝓻𝓼 ˚*•̩̩͙✩•̩̩͙*˚＊(𝐹𝑖𝑟𝑠𝑡 𝑒𝑣𝑒𝑟 𝑝𝑜𝑒𝑚 ℎ𝑒𝑟𝑒!)

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＊•̩̩͙✩•̩̩͙＊𝑼𝒑𝒐𝒏 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒗𝒆𝒍𝒗𝒆𝒕 𝒏𝒊𝒈𝒉𝒕,

𝑻𝒉𝒆𝒚 𝒔𝒑𝒓𝒊𝒏𝒌𝒍𝒆 𝒅𝒖𝒔𝒕 𝒐𝒇 𝒔𝒊𝒍𝒗𝒆𝒓 𝒍𝒊𝒈𝒉𝒕,

𝑨 𝒔𝒊𝒍𝒆𝒏𝒕, 𝑺𝒑𝒂𝒓𝒌𝒍𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒄𝒐𝒔𝒎𝒊𝒄 𝒅𝒂𝒏𝒄𝒆.

𝑰𝒏 𝒃𝒐𝒖𝒏𝒅𝒍𝒆𝒔𝒔 𝒅𝒂𝒓𝒆, 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒅𝒆𝒆𝒑 𝒆𝒙𝒑𝒂𝒏𝒔𝒆.

𝑨 𝒈𝒖𝒊𝒅𝒆 𝒇𝒐𝒓 𝒅𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒎𝒔 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒔𝒐𝒇𝒕𝒍𝒚 𝒄𝒓𝒆𝒆𝒑.

𝑾𝒉𝒊𝒍𝒆 𝒂𝒍𝒍 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒍𝒆𝒆𝒑𝒚 𝒘𝒐𝒓𝒍𝒅'𝒔 𝒂𝒔𝒍𝒆𝒆𝒑. ＊•̩̩͙✩•̩̩͙＊

[vestal bay]

I like your imagery, it's simple and it makes a dreamy setting

[winged flare]

Aww is so beautiful

[zinc prism]

＊•̩̩͙✩•̩̩͙＊𝑼𝒑𝒐𝒏 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒗𝒆𝒍𝒗𝒆𝒕 𝒏𝒊𝒈𝒉𝒕,

𝑻𝒉𝒆𝒚 𝒔𝒑𝒓𝒊𝒏𝒌𝒍𝒆 𝒅𝒖𝒔𝒕 𝒐𝒇 𝒔𝒊𝒍𝒗𝒆𝒓 𝒍𝒊𝒈𝒉𝒕,
The first two lines are very interesting. There are things...sprinkling "silver light" across the night sky, literally planting the Stars? Very good imagery.

"𝑨 𝒔𝒊𝒍𝒆𝒏𝒕, 𝑺𝒑𝒂𝒓𝒌𝒍𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒄𝒐𝒔𝒎𝒊𝒄 𝒅𝒂𝒏𝒄𝒆. "
"Sparkling" doesn't need a capital letter, but you probably just made a typo...
Silent, sparkling, AND cosmic is a bit excessive, in my opinion. It does force you to slow down a little, so it kind of helps for the rhythm.

"𝑰𝒏 𝒃𝒐𝒖𝒏𝒅𝒍𝒆𝒔𝒔 𝒅𝒂𝒓𝒆, 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒅𝒆𝒆𝒑 𝒆𝒙𝒑𝒂𝒏𝒔𝒆. "
"Boundless dare" feels a little out of place...I'm not sure why. It might fit the characterization of these entities, reinforcing their dreamy nature, but it just feels a bit clunky here.

"𝑨 𝒈𝒖𝒊𝒅𝒆 𝒇𝒐𝒓 𝒅𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒎𝒔 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕 𝒔𝒐𝒇𝒕𝒍𝒚 𝒄𝒓𝒆𝒆𝒑. "
Don't really get this one, but it's interesting. Implies the cosmic dance going on is influencing people their dreams...

"𝑾𝒉𝒊𝒍𝒆 𝒂𝒍𝒍 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒍𝒆𝒆𝒑𝒚 𝒘𝒐𝒓𝒍𝒅'𝒔 𝒂𝒔𝒍𝒆𝒆𝒑. ＊•̩̩͙✩•̩̩͙＊"
I don't really like "sleep" coming up twice in the same line like this, but it's not a big problem. Poem's lofty enough for it. It's a soft ending.

A good first poem. Thank you for sharing this.

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Omgggg Tysmmmmm for the feedback!
I'll take not of it! 💖

[dry river]

Short and simple; yet dazzling to read, great job!

I love it