#My 67th love poem
midnight merlin
midnight merlin
hahah my crush is my girlfriend of 4 years, i do try hard heh
rancid pond
She's 4 years old How old are you???
twilit rock
As it is, its a solid piece. I sense that youre mesmerised by the world you find yourself in with your crush. But if I were your crush, I wouldn't understand it if this is the first time I received this from you. It's too intimate and personal. I would feel a bit weirded out. If you want to show them your poem for the first time, its better to keep it simple, and easier to digest before bombarding them with all your weight.
rancid pond
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So what you need to do with is, Tell a story with your poem, not about how you feel, Show it through character. make it as if your characters were destined to be.
Like in The Lord of the Rings
Make a world that your crush can fall in love with,
if She loves your world she will love you
twilit rock
So what you need to do with is, Tell a story with your poem, not about how you f...
True, that would make it more impactful and memorable to her. She would be able to relate and understand better.
rancid pond
I got a whole world built by Second Earth Forbidden Earth and Forgotten Earth. Forbidden Earth is a place of 6 kingdoms second earth is a place of 4 And forgotten earth is a place of death.
A barrier stands between Second and Forbidden Earth.
Forgotten earth is buried deep Inside Forbidden Earth.
I swear to God I can't stop Comparing forgotten and forbidden and second earth to middle earth
There is no Middle Earth it's just forgotten Earth
2nd Earth
And forbidden Earth
Forgotten Earth is just a tree
Forbidden Earth is separated from Second Earth because the unknown lives in The forbidden Earth.
It's kind of like the barrier between the seven kingdoms of Game of Thrones and then the outer world where the wildlings go beyond the wall.
but the point is just make a world make some characters with your poem, and Make sure you understand your characters better than your crush,
stable turtleBOT
but the point is just make a world make some characters with your poem, and Make...
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