The holy collection of thine eye : night and death ( unfinished)

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@deft scaffold

Sorry it’s much longer

@high rover it’s my other poem

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@coral bluff

[coral bluff]

Oooh you posted!

I’ll read it

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Sorry I want to get more people to read it everyone I tagged hasn’t read it

If u can tag more too😭

[strange gate]

Thank u

[coral bluff]

Oki

[serene flame]

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[unborn island]

Girlie this is too much writing for me to be able to read :')

[coral bluff]

😔😔😔

I like death more than nigjt but I love them Both. I’m not good at feedback but the old timy language is natural it doesn’t sound forced

[strange gate]

It’s ok it’s just 2 poems but I understand