Daybreak Descends <Alvy>

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[frank ermine]

Pretty poem I love the imagery in it yes and the metaphor? Superb work! ❤️❤️

Love

[bronze delta]

Thanks babes

[frank ermine]

Yes, u better write more

[hot sable]

I love how each and every connotation of each and every word sinks in and forms a tiny world inside the poem. Outside all that, this made me think about how my life has been concealing so many things and how much I regret about __________________.

[bronze delta]

Thank you sm 😍

[hot sable]

Thy words made my day!

[latent kernel]

Very fun and pretty!

[slim yarrow]

This is yummy. Good closure bringing back the coin. Love the various slant rhyming. Nature poetry is always cool

[bronze delta]

Heh thanks :3

[near thistle]

amazing typography and the poem is very imagery beautiful

i like it very much

thumbs up for me W

[bronze delta]

Thank you :3

[elder jasper]

Alright this almost had me confused lmao

Although yes the title Daybreak Descends, which perhaps implies this is a portrayal of a sunset phase, the way this poem was written has me thinking this can also be interpreted as a sunrise phase too??

That aside, the imagery is magical with weaving music and shine together into the situation the sun and moon are having.

Additionally, it's nice the_framed (The Poet) mentioned about how it resonates to the things that were concealed in their life, in which it makes sense that way too in some way if I base it on astrology where the moon is based on the inner self in contrast with the sun based on the core/outer self.

In that way this poem can be interpreted wherein there's a confliction and attempt at harmonization between your inner and outer selves.

Idk even know I may be overthinking this but that's my thoughts so far on the poem, it's great!

[bronze delta]

Its a very accurate representation of why I wrote thisss hehe

Thanks!

[edgy raft]

It’s so beautiful I love the imagery :)

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