#Monday Woes

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steady warren
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seven a.m.
i brew a cup of morning coffee
(it doesn’t wake me up)

eight thirty a.m.
i drive to work (a corporate job where my thoughts
abandon my mind— like they’re on strike)

nine a.m.
the boss’s girlfriend greets me—
i walk into my simple office.
it hasn’t known a decoration before.

twelve p.m. (noon)
forgot to break my fast this morning
(again). i hear the wolves,
roused by my aching stomach.
(their prey is long in arrival).

five thirty p.m.
i got another ticket
for driving too sluggish
(the sixth one this week)
i don’t want to go home.

six thirty p.m.
there’s no one home but me
(there never was anyone else)

eight p.m.
my dinner was a sandwich— PB&J
washed down with a cheap spirit.

eleven thirty p.m.
my phone is almost out of battery
it’s tuesday tomorrow.

Honest feedback and criticism welcomed, and any stars or hearts are appreciated :)

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Kind of a different type of poem this time, would love to know what yall think!

midnight urchinBOT
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*Kind of a different

type of poem this time, would love

to know what yall think!*

steady warren
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I must be cursed

obsidian sonnetBOT
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steady warren
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@cold shard

vast saddle
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idk what it is

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but its so tuff

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great work

steady warren
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yay

vast saddle
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that doesnt sound happy

steady warren
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ooooh

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lemme rephrase

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Yay PandaSurprised

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Emojis are so nice for conveying happiness

vast saddle
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there we go 😂

radiant inlet
steady warren
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They're metaphorical wolves

radiant inlet
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.-.

steady warren
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Basically the narrators just really hungry

radiant inlet
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WOAH

steady warren
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lol

radiant inlet
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SHERLOCK

radiant inlet
steady warren
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And break the fast

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breakfast

radiant inlet
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Oh

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OHHH

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OMG

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IS THAT WHAT BREAKFAST MEANS

steady warren
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Deep thoughts

radiant inlet
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OMGGGG

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U gave me worldy insights

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Deserve a follow

obsidian sonnetBOT
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@radiant inlet is now following @steady warren.

steady warren
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You’re welcome :)

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i guess thats just the job of a therapist

radiant inlet
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Lol

steady warren
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im definitely a therapidt

radiant inlet
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Deffinatly

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Star spelling ik

cold shard
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OOUUUWEEEEEEE I love it tbh- idk why but I rly like it like it’s calling to me but it feels a bit eerie idk

steady warren
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@dull skiff

dull skiff
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oh i already read this gng

steady warren
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oops

dull skiff
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but i have no job so

steady warren
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It's ok you didn't drop feedback Angel

dull skiff
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lemme actually drop one rq

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gimme 5 minutes

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1st stanza - the rhythm is smooth and the relatable-ness of it is very

2nd stanza. nice description of emotion and i really like the detail with the corporate job. this is relatable but i don't have a job so.

3rd stanza - there's motion going on. walking and greeting. i love how the description of the decoration that hadn't met your office it means your office is very dull.

4th stanza. great imagery I really like the symbolism of the wolves.

5th stanza. i don't drive i have no car but it's relatable as hell i don't know why

6th stanza - the plain truth really hurts and in this stanza it's very good

7th stanza - i like pb&j wash down with cheap spirit too

8th stanza - this is relatable as hell gng

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yo i really like ts gng

steady warren
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Wow that's good