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[white flint]

managed to fit this all onto one image !!
all my pookies are required to read this
i wrote this in form
@honest bolt @bright plover @dusky lotus @plush cloak

[honest bolt]

Its so goods ssjkskssooskxlao
Let me snatch your skill pleaseeeee
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[bright plover]

E?

I love it and the meaning, do u want feedback Cameron?

[white flint]

yeah go ahead

[white flint]

you can steal it if you can find it XD

[naive magnet]

omg this is so good

great work!!

[bright plover]

Well this is smth I deal with too, but I would suggest to space your syllables, since they seem a bit uneven, as for line one and two, maybe add more to line 2 bc it seems like it goes with one on the same line. Like
'the stars seem to shine brighter tonight'
So maybe for the 2nd do smth like
'brighter than ever' but that doesn't really fix it. Also for line 11 I think its way too long, but I get it if u did that so it would fit in the frame. And that's all I can give, maybe someone else could give u more

[white flint]

i like the contrast between the long line and the short lines tbh
makes it seem more like wondering thoughts and kind of breaks up the writing imo

[bright plover]

I mean sure

[dusky lotus]

I love how unique your poems are and how they stand out