#Thunderbolt

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cinder dagger
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Thunderbolt

Walk, Walk, Walk then suddenly stopped;
Felt that oxytocin overdose.
Due to that lustful thoughts could not
Even reach my brain, that is one less pain.
I got stunned, stationed at a place;
Then thunderbolt strikes me insane.
After that, a gaze hit me like a train;
One not even directed to my lane.

The thunderbolt had deafened me,
To everything except that beauty.
Passing by people hit me
But I could not care less.
Imagined her in [an] elegant dress.
The aftermath could be a mess?

After sleeping with my eyes open,
Daydreaming with my mouth open,
I woke up to see my coffee, now stolen.
My decision making was still swollen.

My heart said we are [somehow] meant to be;
By Aphrodite, [she’s] sent to me.
My brain instantly went to disagree,
Though it was what it [too] wanted to be.

While they fought on decision making,
I chose a ride for fiction-making.
[I] held her hands, though mine were shaking.
We admired the moon; I was faking.

In front of her, moon went dull.
I was the sea and she the sea eagle.

ocean dawn
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👍

nimble wave
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im so sorry if you went through this :(( it really captures the fear of being with a person after they commit such actions towards you and youve put it perfectly. great poem

cinder dagger
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It's about stendhal's thunderbolt as he describes in his work On Love

strange quailBOT
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It's about stendhal's

thunderbolt as he describes

in his work On Love

cinder dagger
nimble wave
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oh im sorry i was not aware

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could you break it down for me?