I met love

[orchid mortar]

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[pulsar swift]

@tawdry sonnet @thorny depot @gleaming shore

@ornate arrow @clever vapor @sly rose

[gleaming shore]

I love the contrast with love being both beautiful and painful, very Romeo and Juliet coded
I really like the way you've described the whole experience of a relationship through 'love' and the way you word it creates really strong imagery ^^

[thorny depot]

I love how it feels like a Romeo and Juliet theme- In a way- I really love this poem :)

(off topic) I DIDNT KNOW U WERE A POET I KUST THOUGHT U JUST FOLLOW RANDOMS

[pulsar swift]

thank you so muchhhh

[pulsar swift]

I'm gladdd

[pulsar swift]

hahaha

I follow too many ppl cuz there aren't any poems to hateee I mean so far I haven't read any bad poems on this srvr

[thorny depot]

Ooohhh

[scarlet quarry]

Wonderful! @thorny depot has just progressed to level 11!

[thorny depot]

Yippie-

[formal pawn]

This might be one of the best interpretations of love I've ever seen

W poem!!

[pulsar swift]

thank you so muchhh

I'd love to read one of your poems

[formal pawn]

I will tag you in an upcoming one!

[pulsar swift]

yeshhh

[cosmic timber]

soooooo real

[tawdry sonnet]

its really really good

i like the theme and the words you used its really good

i wish i would be able to write like this

[ornate arrow]

it’s somg oodododdkkakakskskska it’s very good

I lvoe repetition poems

AMZING

[pulsar swift]

thank youu

[pulsar swift]

thanksss you should watch the spoken word poetry it's soooooooooo so good

[pulsar swift]

thank youuu then I have another you might like

[ornate arrow]

did u rwsd mine this morning? I love comments
And I’d love to read more of uours

[pulsar swift]

yesss I love ur love poems they're so cute made me emotional a bit lolz and thank youu same to you I could tag you in some of my old ones in awhile is that okay

[ornate arrow]

Ofc
I love reading comments btw if u ever wanna comment

[pulsar swift]

def I haven't read a few poems of urs will leave them later it's been a busy day

[scarlet quarry]

Wonderful! @pulsar swift has just progressed to level 22!

[pulsar swift]

yeshhh ( though I've never experienced it)

[cosmic timber]

u responded to me twice lol

[pulsar swift]

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[pulsar swift]

shhh nothing happened

[pulsar swift]

I have a question did u ever study poetry

[cosmic timber]

i mean

no

not rly

[pulsar swift]

ouh then nvm

[cosmic timber]

why?

[pulsar swift]

I saw dis dude write in feedbacks smth like 6-6-6-6 and sometimes 7 or 8 and I don't understand

[cosmic timber]

show

[pulsar swift]

wait

[pulsar swift]

gotta do smth so will show in awhile

[pulsar swift]

dis thingy

[cosmic timber]

is the second stanza his revision

[pulsar swift]

I think

[cosmic timber]

the numbers are the syllables per line and he felt they needed to match, im assuming for meterical purposes

[pulsar swift]

ooooooo

ouhh

[cosmic timber]

his revision was as if taking gold and powerwashing it into silver through magic

[pulsar swift]

ouh

wow

thanks

[cosmic timber]

yeah

was taht ur poem?

ohhh @pulsar swift

revision

i didnt know it was his poem and the context of it

he shpuldnt have revised what was written he was just listening to someone else that shouldnt have said anything tbh lol

[pulsar swift]

it was his lolz

I couldn't find the other ones and saw that

so

yeap

[hollow quarry]

Omg i just figured out i dont follow u
What am i doing with my life

[orchid mortar]

@hollow quarry is now following @pulsar swift.

[pulsar swift]

stawppp that was so random but so sweet

💗

[cosmic timber]

i dont know why dont u just follow me 😭🙏

[pulsar swift]

👀

[cosmic timber]

jk but would you mind reading a poem of mine 🙏

[hollow quarry]

Sureee

I dont mind

[cosmic timber]

thank youuu

[main vortex]

This one's so good I really loved reading it I loved how you used the word Love in every paragraph it makes it feel more alive

[orchid mortar]

@main vortex is now following @pulsar swift.

[pulsar swift]

thank you so very muchhh

[sly rose]

the whole beautiful journey of love

from its warmth

to its heartbreak

i rlly like how each stanza starts with love is...

n then js shifts the meaning

step by step

like its changing in real time

ending hits hard as hell

cuz it shows the pull

n the pain of it

very well structured

great work

[orchid mortar]

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[pulsar swift]

thank you very much

again thank youuu

[pulsar swift]

@dusky hazel

[pulsar swift]

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[pulsar swift]

@white thunder

[white thunder]

"Love is playing a game with fate.. "

every poem you write has some lines that just touch my heart truly, this is one of them

[pulsar swift]

thank you

[pulsar swift]

@analog ice

[analog ice]

The phases of love—
so adoring, so pleasing at first,
almost addictive.
But in the end, it’s fear—
the fear of what falling in love again
might do to you.

[pulsar swift]

yeah

[pulsar swift]

I met love

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