I know

[gilded oriole]

I know
Trust me I do

I know I’m not enough
My words don’t sink
My care isn’t evident
And you fear that I’ll leave

I know I never will
But there is not a way to affirm
Overthinking makes you spiral

I know that as I sit here
Staring at my phone
And damaging my eyes
I’m crying
Because I do know
That I’m not enough
That maybe I made it worse
And I’ll loose this one day
But you’ll suffer worse

They fall down my cheek
And land on my bed
My cherry blossom bed spread
You’re supposes to come visit some day
And we will sit here
But we don’t cry
We’ll smile
Because we have each other
Right?

[pastel hatch]

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[lilac finch]

Woah

Id say the cherry blossom part is nice, but if ur going for a sad type of poem id go more for like the falling leaves or flowers, smth smth. Or if u kept it there for contrast its great i usually dont end on questions bc it gives a vibe of uncertainty but for this its very good. Also i suggest trying to limit the ‘and’s at the start of a verse

Ts very good tho

[gilded oriole]

Iwas lowkey spiraling so a lot of ands hapoened
The fslling leaves is a good idea
I do fr have a cherry blossom bed spread

[lilac finch]

Rly?

[gilded oriole]

yeah

lol bed reveal

[lilac finch]

Wow prtyyyyy

[gilded oriole]

Yesss

[covert helm]

your poems make me go 🤧

[gilded oriole]

@prime drum

[prime drum]

It's adorable

[gilded oriole]

God

Rereading this poem

When I still had him

And was worried I’d loose it

Now I’ve lost it