buoyant sundial
I wish I’d packed my bags,
Moved on before our home fell apart.
stabbed and kissed by the handle of the knife,
I still loved though your love was gone
All the beautiful pictures we’d drawn,
I watched as it crashed to ash by dawn
As if the day you held me by the rails
Was meant to strangle me by the heart
Though that’s forgotten and forgiven,
Amidst all the pain you caused,
Cheating and treating love,
As if it was never fought
spiral rivet
Many people have felt the anguish of heartbreak, regret, and lost love, which makes this poem incredibly relatable. Anyone who has experienced a challenging breakup or emotional turmoil will find great resonance in the raw emotion and vivid imagery, which authentically capture those feelings. The poem also has a melancholy tone, emphasizing the pain and longing that frequently come with lost love. A sense of melancholy and introspection is evoked by the descriptions of crashing pictures, being strangled by the heart, and betrayal. All in all, it's a moving composition that speaks to the universal experience of love's frailty and the anguish of its absence.
buoyant sundial
Many people have felt the anguish of heartbreak, regret, and lost love, which ma...
you know what’s crazy…that is my first ever piece and yeah it wasn’t really hard to create as I was struggling in that movement
Thank you 🙏❤️❤️
spiral rivet
Thank you 🙏❤️❤️
Of course :).. honestly I really liked your piece a lot..
toxic vale
I first got into poetry in a similar way to cope and damn its clear you've went through some deep stuff man, its the fact you've created such a short piece but it's filled with so much emotion its just pure emotion, theres literally no filler lines nothing like that, each line is just thought out, it has a purpose. As a first poem this is amazing dude and hope you found someone to talk to 10/10
buoyant sundial
I first got into poetry in a similar way to cope and damn its clear you've went...
Is it actually this good…damn thank you sir…much love
Isolation and reflection saved me
toxic vale
same here dude I lost my friends and turned to poetry luckily I got em back after a bit, but it's how I fully got into writing and I try to write when I can, plus poetry helped me get through stuff its weirdly good at helping with that idk why really
buoyant sundial
Of course :).. honestly I really liked your piece a lot..
I want to share another one with you if you don’t mind
spiral rivet
I want to share another one with you if you don’t mind
Yes, pleaseee !!
tag me in anything 💗