#A Summer To Repeat

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keen crag
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These ridges from my fingers,
Reminds me of our last summer
Where the heat beneath our feet,
Stops the fear that we need to meet.

Your smooth digits on my olive skin
Your lips came from some fine wine
We held our aching hearts together
Just dancing beyond the white line.

I've told you everything that night
Your heartbeat guiding the moonlight
Saying I need you closer than ever
Giving you my life feels so much better

You've said some funny things after
Near a burning fire with laughter
With your smile reaching the stars
You said they'll shine and we're ours

So we laid down across the pale sand
Holding our arms pointing like a wand
Burning prints as we touch the ground
Can't forget this magic we've found

I'm so glad that I saw your blue eyes
I'm so happy we didn't make up lies
I'm so sorry that I knew it was time
I have to go and catch some signs

As the blissful sun jumps into the sky
We hugged each other feeling so high
Pushing the soft covers up our thighs
Then I took my bags and said goodbyes

It will all slowly disappear eventually
We'll be nothing but a deep memory
You have lives to secure with pride
I have reasons to pick a different side

Years passed and I remembered you
So I took a name written on some game
Seems your face grew in many ways
Life's looking great with your twin flame

Hopefully you'll never forget me
Trying to find others who could fit
At castles we shaped like we're free
To color an endless summer in repeat.

oak rain
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Hi! I really liked this poem. One thing I would look at is I can tell that the lack of punctuation from stanza three onwards is intentional, but are the capital letters at the beginning of each line intentional? If it is supposed to flow as one long sentence I would maybe look at whether they could be changed to lowercase

keen crag
keen crag