An Abandoned Castle

[feral acorn]

hellooo! i love this piece.

can you give more concrete examples?

include more imagery to really immerse the reader

[opaque bone]

Yes I love the poem and the direction. I would just include more concrete lines. For example you could explain the dream you had and make it feel like the readers are in it

[steep falcon]

Wonderful! @opaque bone has just progressed to level 1!

[radiant gazelle]

Thankss!! @feral acorn I really appreciate your feedback

[radiant gazelle]

Thankss!! @opaque bone would try to do it in the best one