molten sparrow
Needles, beautifully composed
In bunches- Evergreen.
Clean, aromatic turpintine.
Soaring and dancing with the breeze.
The colossal opus, opening with ease.
A gust in the trees...
2.. And a-
3...
A waltz,
Whose moments-
Composed in a movement.
A chorus,
That's in need of no improvements
With a tempo's pace,
That's moderately smooth, and
Gracefully grooves with it.
Swaying.
short inlet
beautiful imagery. the piece feels extremely abstract, though. perhaps you could add some more concrete detail to it? beautiful rhythm.
molten sparrow
beautiful imagery. the piece feels extremely abstract, though. perhaps you could...
i can definitely do a revision to add more details. was watching the pine trees sway in the wind and wrote this 😄
short inlet
it’s very beautiful.
you should describe the color! color sticks in a persons mind very easily, and it’ll help them remember what you’re describing :)
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short inlet
ofc!! excited to read more of your work
hidden frigate
Music :)