was your love real or fake

[wet fern]

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[slate field]

But that is so real 😭

[static rampart]

... 👏...

quite the profound work... I must say...

[late swan]

thank you so much

[spare stump]

This is so real

Amazing work

[late swan]

means a lot thanks

[wet fern]

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[late swan]

@keen wharf @somber pendant@glossy hemlock

[late swan]

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[wet fern]

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[faint shoal]

🫂🫂🫂

[ivory shore]

as a youngest , relatable -

i dk about ya'll but i've learned one thing and that is to reflect things back to people

if kindness then yep kind , if sad then yep kind again (don't wanna ruin the connections )

[late swan]

its also best to be kind and humble and if they hurt screw connections why be with someone that doesn't value u and ur feelings cuz they must apologize my advice and thank you for reading my poem

also by screw connections i mean like distance yourself from them find a better kind loving crowd yk

[ivory shore]

i used to be like that

[ivory shore]

in that process only

like ....
you would be there missing me and my space
my kind words which you hate , my voice and my eyes
yet only after that quiet finds you too
you will know the price to be kind and to put charm
i would be air by then , my words not meant a thing
yet you would be there when quiet gets you too

not a poem

just saying

but ironically them people just literally replaced me so easily like wow

it's really funny actually how you can be kind and see each and others pov but when you don't whisper , they don't even know you are there

i mean , people say be kind but to whom ?

[late swan]

wow-

[late swan]

lolz yeap really nice tho

[late swan]

REALLLL

me going through that these days

[late swan]

for me thankfully i have some friends and we are close like family

[lethal kernel]

*for me thankfully

i have some friends and we are

close like family*

- bdjkcuqvowibq

[late swan]

first yourself

u need to accept and love urself and give it the kindness it deserves

i think that matters most

bc in the end u always have urself

so learn even when you're alone to be happy and content with just yourself bc u know u r enough and u matter

u need to see urself highly and treat urself gently

[ivory shore]

same heree and those people they are not whom i know for a very long time , we just met this year only

[ivory shore]

I don't want to go there actually once you start isolation you never get out

it's just stops , prevents you from talking to another

person and like it's a trap basically

[ivory shore]

my username used to be highly

Y-Y that was the last time i thought highly of myself lol

[lethal kernel]

*Y-Y that was the

last time i thought highly of

myself lol*

- CollapsedMoonstar

[late swan]

awhh i hope they are the ones who are good and stay

[late swan]

i didn't mean isolation

[ivory shore]

they areee

[late swan]

also thanks for the talk actually inspired me to write a poem

[ivory shore]

OH MY BAD

[lethal kernel]

*also thanks for the

talk actually inspired

me to write a poem*

- bdjkcuqvowibq

[ivory shore]

No problem broo

that's how we poets are , finding poems in life lol

[late swan]

its okayyyyyyy like js even w friends or anyone value urself ur rights ur boundaries know u aren't worth anything less

[late swan]

u should still see urself that way cuz u r amazing yk

[ivory shore]

i haven't set much boundaries , idk how to set them lol

[late swan]

frrr i have been writing nonstop lately

[ivory shore]

let's goo i wrote something today too

[ivory shore]

yes hard part of living

🥀

[late swan]

like if anyone talks abt smth or someone u love badly

[late swan]

ooo i wanna seee

[late swan]

wdymm harddd

sorry family camee

[ivory shore]

to live is to suffer to suffer is to live, wait till eternal only to live for one more moment
met masses of meat who dwell in skin of fox, met humans who think they are eternal
only for the ending to greet them too, don't be like them, live eternal then waits for it
be a human not a being, love the person in the mirror, adore the change

To love is to suffer to suffer is to live, love and not lust then maybe it will stick
sown seeds are dead by the drought then came the flood and cloud burst ended it all
maybe ending was an answer to a better seed, to a better need and a better meet
let destiny guide but not let is control your life, not ride a passenger have a will to live

To live is to suffer to suffer is to live maybe another meet won't be like last time
even then don't put your heart in them beware of the kind old experience, shake hands often
rather than heads, to live is to suffer to suffer is to live.

ere you goo broo

[ivory shore]

no worries

[ivory shore]

oh that , that i have set quite clear and well 🐦‍🔥

[late swan]

dies im in love with this this is.. wow.. js wow

[late swan]

good like those stuff or ppl being rude to u cuz they shouldn't

[ivory shore]

thankss , that meanss a lottt

[late swan]

don't mention ittt

[ivory shore]

hmm let em be rude or angry , they are not my priority

[late swan]

yeah.. letting it go is better but if it gets bad action must be taken

[ivory shore]

i've hadn't let go of many people and like it was worse

trying to be the good person isn't it sometimes

[late swan]

but how abt being good to urself?

[ivory shore]

||Never thought about that option||

[late swan]

you might wanna consider it yeah?

it makes you feel better

i was that one person that hated my own self most and loved others but later i learned to appreciate self love bc trust ut boosts confidence and all too

[ivory shore]

literally me

[late swan]

@shut pasture feedback?

[late swan]

so u appreciate it now?

[ivory shore]

nah nah i hate myself still little but atleast i am not someone who does not accept things

got humbled by life so am humble these days

[late swan]

learn to love urself more-

[late swan]

awh im glad to hear

also what type of poems do u write most like happy sad or

[ivory shore]

yes mam (i thought you were a guy at first , so i wrote bro but then checked , so sry for that gang)

[ivory shore]

depends

[late swan]

lolzzz dude we even talked beforeee pspspsps and he forgot im wounded brotha

[late swan]

hm?

[ivory shore]

i wrote this today and lastly i guess wrote about love or death

[ivory shore]

you are wounded ? what happened

[late swan]

ohh i was gonna ask if u wanna do a poem collab

[ivory shore]

i will be happy to do so

[late swan]

lolz im js be dramatic- and it cuz u forgot we know each other buh u forgot

[ivory shore]

but let's meet after tomorrow cause tomorrow is my last exam

[late swan]

yaaayyyyy

[lethal kernel]

*but let's meet after

tomorrow cause tomorrow

is my last exam*

- CollapsedMoonstar

[ivory shore]

PHYSICS Y-Y

[late swan]

good luckk

[ivory shore]

oooh lolll

[late swan]

got bio tmr here

[ivory shore]

i need no luck but practice Y-Y

[ivory shore]

damn where are you from ?

[late swan]

REALLL- then practice well sir

[ivory shore]

i have PCB so my bio exam was on i guess 26th

[late swan]

maldivesss hbu

[late swan]

u indian

[ivory shore]

Inida

[late swan]

i heard of that

[ivory shore]

sadly yes 🥀

[late swan]

pcb big exam thingy

[late swan]

why saddd

[ivory shore]

yeah NEET 🥀

[late swan]

i love the foods and culture and traditions and all

so unique

[ivory shore]

cultures are good people are not

[late swan]

yerr ik like two other ppl that did that i think

[late swan]

frfr agreed i hate it

its always the ppl

and the things they do

[kind apex]

Wonderful! @late swan has just progressed to level 21!

[late swan]

ooooo

[ivory shore]

ohh like they did it or in the process ?

[ivory shore]

let's gooo 21

Icarus

my boy

[late swan]

one did the other in process or might have finished i forgot cuz we don't rlly text

[late swan]

ooo wot dat

idk dat

[ivory shore]

oohh i guess that's good

[late swan]

yeshh

[ivory shore]

Icarus had wings of wax i guess so he should not have flown to sun

[lethal kernel]

*Icarus had wings

of wax i guess so he should

not have flown to sun*

- CollapsedMoonstar

[ivory shore]

but his dream was to see sun

[late swan]

wow-

[ivory shore]

and he did so , he flew , and wings melted

[late swan]

whaaa

he risked his wings

[ivory shore]

and then he fell to the earth lost but fulfilled heart

[ivory shore]

for his passion to see sun it's like awesome

[late swan]

was it a happy ending?

[late swan]

passion is a strong yet beautiful thing

[ivory shore]

i guess

[ivory shore]

yessss

[late swan]

ouh i hope

[late swan]

fr

[ivory shore]

You sound like a cool lady ima send you poemsss

my ig account have like 40 poems there

and some i've posted here only

[late swan]

awh thanks js saw this i wish i could see could u send it to me i could visit the site and check them out

[ancient siren]

beautifully painful.

[late swan]

thank you

[ancient siren]

I adore how close that hits, the paradox of an experience being so common to many is truly a wonderful topic to write about, and the way you handle the pain? Ecstatic for the mind of a reader

[late swan]

the kind words

[ancient siren]

don't call it kindness, and even if — adoration is fully deserved here

you did a great job

[late swan]

that means sooo much thank you thank you thank youuu

[ancient siren]

[wet fern]

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[wet fern]

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[shut pasture]

your poem has raw honesty i could feel the pain in each word and love mixed together, the imagery of knives adn flames is very nice i like it because it shows how deep that hurt goes and i like how you used quatrains with a rhyme scheme it gives your emotions a rythmn that really carries the poem and i do have some suggestion you could like meta[hor or simile of like comparing your mothers voice to something harsh to add more vivid but overall this an amazing poem , you did an amazing job!!!

[late swan]

ouhh okey will try that next time thanks a lot but how do u mean like compare it with smth harsh..?

[shut pasture]

like use like simile or metaphot to make the feeling of the mothers voice or behavior more vivid like for example

simile: " her voice cracked like glass shattering my ears"
metaphor: " her voice was a hammer breaking dreams apart"

in your poem you already use metaphors like "knives you throw" and you could expand that idea by comparing her words,tone or actions to other sjarp.burning or cold things .

[late swan]

oooo i really like those and thank you so muchh

[shut pasture]

thats good im glad!! , and your welcome

[somber pendant]

💕

Omg like I thought this was like a love poem like relationship but then I read it back and it had such a different meaning

[late swan]

@severe vapor

[late swan]

I've improved a lot now buh this was befo

[severe vapor]

heartt wrenching

[late swan]

lolz thanks

[severe vapor]

Wdym thanks
More Power to you cause this was very vulnerable
And good

[late swan]

idkkkk sorryyy lolz me in a really really good mood today keep in mind half of me is up in the clouds so I'm not fully conscious lmao and thank you and thanks for trusting me with your vulnerable poemss I know it's not easy but you're doing awesomeee