baby teeth

[weak cloud]

nostalgia is a fickle thing
like spotted fawns born in spring
dirt worn like a second skin
in seasons gone but held within
grass-kissed knees
on ma’s old jeans
but time forgets the scent of rain
and all soft things must soon learn pain

[novel canyon]

beautiful

[acoustic hedge]

incredible work, i love the rich imagery you use!

[weak cloud]

tysm!!

[olive blade]

this hits hard the way you capture nostalgia with little moments like the fawn and grass kissed knees is beautiful love how it goes from soft to that tough ending really pulls you in

[weak cloud]

aww tysm!!

[olive blade]

[deft swift]

that was amazing! i can really conjure up an image in my mind, very vivid writing well done

[weak cloud]

tysm!

[hardy tendon]

this is so beautiful !!