#Out of sync - Snivy

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arctic kiln
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Life’s a frequency.

We move through it
in different waveforms.

When we were kids,
we all seemed to share the same frequency —
steady, simple,
in sync.

Rare were the ones who didn’t.

But as we grew,
our frequencies began to shift.
Some rose higher,
some fell lower,
but most stayed steady.

Then there were the others —
those whose frequencies
were all over the place.

Sometimes they soared.
Sometimes they dipped.
Sometimes they leveled out,
just for a moment.

And sometimes —
they barely registered at all.

A soft waveform,
faint as a fading heartbeat.

Maybe they were just
out of sync.
Waiting,
for someone
to tune in with.

Maybe that’s just how life works.

Or maybe —
I’m just
out of sync.

naive helmBOT
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@arctic kiln is now following @karmic kettle.

storm mirage
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I like the simple style

arctic kiln
storm mirage
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If you want to improve you should try to take rhyming into consideration of some kind

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Like repetition of first word in poem I remember I remember

arctic kiln
storm mirage
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Most welcome

arctic kiln
# storm mirage Most welcome

just have in mind my next posted poems are already written for a while, so you might not notice your suggestion in action NoizeLoves

fair phoenixBOT