(Reposted because I tagged wrong) Immortal Words

[white plank]

Please can I have feedback

[drowsy basin]

Wonderful! @white plank has just progressed to level 1!

[daring whale]

I LOVE THIS

to me the theme is "fear of failure"

using pen and paper as metaphors/tools to convey it

then leaving it off with the message for the reader "better to try and fail than to never try at all"

if this is correct you've done an amazing job conveying it :>

[white plank]

thank you so much!!