#Together Our Stories Merge Even in Shadows

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proper oracle
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Together Our Stories Merge Even in Shadows

İ seek serenity and they say its stupidity,
I do not appreciate the burdensome silence.
A mere whisper in my ear, that i could call guidance…
Still my time here reeks of serendipity!

İ never sought this much, but now to gaze upon the Orion and know its stars to an exact,
To reach to my heart and feel flesh before i act…
İs all i wanted, could fate oblige “me” these days?

İ have no offer, no way to bribe the big eyes,
Their sight exceed the next step of my rise,
İ am lost in a forests where others are trees,
Just as confused yet accepting of the breeze…

Oh, seldom do i bring myself to penance,
To unreachable knowledge my dependence,
İs quite a shame, İ forget i am mere dust.
But we all collect in time, still trees do what they must!
Life is all but fraught with trifle mistakes,
Am i to fear the “higher” stakes?
İ see nothing more than the step i take,
İ steer the ship so should i let thunder be fate?
The darker i think of the sky i forget the
light of trees pasts that should guide me,
One day i will become stars that’ll light the nights,
My unknown story will be among many others fights.
Why must i stupidly sulk whilst we are all in shadow?
There ought to be surprise, so I’ll embrace the our golden glow..

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jagged wing
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This is interesting

quartz lotus
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The poem is beautiful and catchy. Good job.

Just one thing, on the 3rd verse on "I am lost in a forests where others are trees," I believe you meant "forest" instead of "forests".

proper oracle
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this poem had ME thinking cuz im literally always SOOO stressed up the future, what will happen, my place after death, UNİVERSİTY EXAM (3 years till than but still very nerve-racking). And İ just do not know. No one does, and not being alone makes me feel good, And being together with people and creating “fate” by all our actions combined, is kinda sick idk. (plus Allah’s will cuz im religous). live love laugh yalll

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alsoo Could i ask if i could tag you guys in my future poems? İd love to read yours too btw!

buoyant hamletBOT
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quartz lotus
proper oracle
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awh thanks so much!