#easy childhood tips

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heady girder
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note from the writer. Please read first
Hi, this is my second work and im hoping to use it as the basis to my college essay. I want to warn you that if you struggle with any parental related emotional issues, struggles with disorders such as bpd, npd, etc, or have someone important in your life that has chosen to be absent, this may not be the happiest thing you will read today. None the less, I hope you know you are loved, and I wish you the best if you choose to carry on ❤️

easy childhood tips
How do you tell a child they aren’t worth fighting for?

Simple. You don’t.
And yet as I sat in the teal and yellow psycologists office I thought to myself one simple thing. Am
I worth saving?
The clock struck 1. Please come on in. I don’t remember her face. I didn’t care to be entirely honest. That was rude, I shouldn’t have said that.
And then came those earth shattering words spilling out of my mouth. “I think theres something wrong with me.”
And thats when it started.
suddenly I was back with my birth giver. My mother? Yes, her. I was back at the window, waiting for her car to show up.
The truth is you don’t tell a child they aren’t worth fighting for by telling them the truth. You tell them with a stuffed pink bear and a promise you’ll never keep.

I think im worth saving.

Thats stupid why would anyone want to save me

I am worth saving. I’m not too far gone

Once i’m saved they’ll leave

Once im saved it won’t bother me anymore

Once someone saves me..?

The truth is, kids in my position don’t get saved. We just get driven over to the nearest pharmacy, and told to take the medications once a day with food. It helps to keep reality in sight.

Easy childhood tips’
Save yourself,
Nobody wants to save an angry dog
Especially not your heros.

arctic pilot
# heady girder **note from the writer. Please read first** Hi, this is my second work and im ho...

the authenticity in your words are beautiful, you are telling a story of yours it’s very deep, i want to give you a suggestion and this is up to you to utilise. the structure of your poetry is just as important as your vocabulary, don’t limit yourself ! I truly believe structure assists to highlight parts of your poetry and make it more powerful, the order and way your poem is laid out to read is as important as your vocabulary, and punctuation. it helps your words flow more. utilising pauses, bold text, italics, etc. if you don’t mind me editing a bit, here’s an example:

easy childhood tips
How do you tell a child they aren’t worth fighting for?

Simple-
you don’t.
And yet as I sat in the teal and yellow psychologists office;
I thought to myself one simple thing.
Am I worth saving?

The clock struck 1.
Please,
come on in.
I don’t remember her face,
I didn’t care to be entirely honest.

That was rude-
I shouldn’t have said that.

then came those earth shattering words spilling out of my mouth;
“I think theres something wrong with me.”
thats when it started.

Suddenly I was back with my birth giver;
My mother?
Yes, her.
I was back at the window,
waiting for her car to show up.

But the truth is;
you don’t tell a child they aren’t worth fighting for,
by telling them the truth.

You tell them with a stuffed pink bear
and a promise you’ll never keep.

I think I’m worth saving,
thats stupid why would anyone want to save me?

I am worth saving.
I’m not too far gone.

Once, i’m saved they’ll leave.
Once, im saved it won’t bother me anymore.
Once, someone;

saves me..?

The truth is,
kids in my position don’t get saved
. We just get driven over to the nearest pharmacy,
and told to take the medications,
once a day with food.
It helps to keep reality in sight.

Easy childhood tips:
Save yourself,
nobody wants to save an angry dog,
especially not your heroes.

I didn’t want to edit or change anything too much, just the structure and fonts, that affects the authenticity, this is yours. And I absolutely love it. let me know what you prefer and what you think, but this is my advice to you and it’s done wonders for my writing! Keep it up NoizeLoves

heady girder