Poem in pict
There's a PDF version too in case it's not clear
#10 Step into The Haze - Miself
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*Poem in pict There's
a PDF version too
in case it's not clear*
- lionias - Miself
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Probably not my strongest poem
But its done
I can move on to the next one now haha
Cus this one is quite a headache to make
Hope yall enjoy
If ya got any suggestions to fix something in the poem do tell me
@rose vine here ya go
I read this a bit ago but I didn't have time to give my thoughts on it
and I love it
great diction
you clearly have a strong vocabulary
good rhymes as well
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Guys we need to get this to the star board
ok
hi
:]]]]
vro will js look at a poem and be like
''men we now bring this to the starboard''
not just any poem
good poems
Great poems
that deserve it
:>>>>>>
Holy mother of god
I was asleep what a surprise !!!
Thanks yall
Trully apreciate it
My first starboard !

10 Step into The Haze - Miself
Oh that first page is gorgeous I'm already jealous
If I just stumbled upon this piece randomly I would've thought for sure it came from some old famous poet
That's amazing
but also shows how skilled you are
You turned it up to eleven
This honestly is one of my favourites
It has that oldschool vibe ? I rarely read poems so idk if it is
Thanks !!
The hole in my sanity line cuts deep for me
Im not sure if it has that vibe but if someone showed me this I would've said "Yes that's edgar allen poe" haha
(I don't many poets to begin with anyway)

Glad you like it




