#a love through seasons

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leaden arch
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summer came early,
and left without a trace of goodbye—
as my hands rolled out of yours,
I softly sighed.
tears fell from my eyes in showers
and trickled into a riverbed,
washing away all pollinated flowers.

summer was ours—
now autumn is here
I still hold you near, dearest,
like a baby clutching its mother’s breast.
the crisp ochre leaves
put our bond to the test

and the time we invested,
though short, was not never—
I love you
‘til the sun rises west.

if we make it to winter,
I’ll forge us an igloo
and we can hibernate together
to climb Everest in frost
would be a treacherous endeavour—
but still—
for you,
I will,
I do.

until comes spring.
we will skip along,
strumming and humming,
singing a song
alongside the lake,
surpass all the ache,
and move on to brighter things,
lighter things—
bumblebees and budding trees
and air tinged with promise and peace.
at ease, with grief released

sincerely, yours

sand pondBOT
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lapis gulch
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I still find myself in an eternal summer of her creation.

final domeBOT
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*I still find myself

in an eternal summer

of her creation.*

lapis gulch
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It was a lovely read.

river fox
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*bumblebees and budding trees
and air tinged with promise and peace.
at ease, with grief released * 🔥 cattucry

final depot
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This is beautiful. Thank you. I needed this today. I love you.

sand pondBOT
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meager oasis
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guys lets get this to the star board

ebon wave
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there.

meager oasis
leaden arch
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thanks guys 🥲

hoary merlin
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Such a heartfelt letter it is!!!! And the seasons I HAD A SIMILAR IDEA OF WRITING SMTH LIKE THIS!!!!! THANKS FOR SUCH A GREAT PIECE SobbinTheLanaDelReyOut

turbid locust
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“I still hold you near, dearest, like a baby clutching its mother's breast.”

How beautiful crafted this poem is. Full of warmth & longing🤍

wanton bison
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this is a wonderful execution of a genuine, wonderful feeling. The "letter" format that is encapsulated at the end is a wonderful, endearing touch. You are once again being so so sooo vivid, its wonderful, and your rhyme scheme is unique. However, the rhyme is masked by a lack of rhythm, arguably. thats my one critique. Up until the last stanza, its hard to find where things are stressed and the tempo lies because you have an inconsistent line structure - however, i think if you read it a certain way, it seems intentional. However, it takes a lot of reads to piece together that rhythm. You are so genuine with your imagery and paint a beautiful scene. "But still / for you / i will / i do" is such a clever and meaningful stream of thought. Without a doubt my favorite.

leaden arch
wanton bison
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of course!! i always try n give longer feedback, sometimes it takes a few days after I've been @ ed tho...