I, Villain

[drifting mountain]

In the play that is this world, I have become the villain, told I was too proud, too full of myself when the main characters everyone worships is stained in blood. Please, enjoy my villain monolougue, play-watchers who care to be entertained by a joker

[simple rampart]

Wanna know the best way to get feedback?

[drifting mountain]

sure

lemme guess

recitals?

[simple rampart]

Make Friends here by Joining Recitals!

[simple rampart]

Yep!

[drifting mountain]

ok i guessed right

[simple rampart]

You don't even need to talk...

[drifting mountain]

sorry im tired tho

[simple rampart]

That's alright

[drifting mountain]

i had several classes

[simple rampart]

Aah, I see.

[drifting mountain]

im so burnt out

appparently the only pity i deserve is self-pretense

[drifting mountain]

@cold geyser

[cold geyser]

I love the constant references to media, eg “play” “main characters” “joker” “play-watchers” etc! I think it perfects encapsulates the idea that everyone making decisions about you, saying you’re a villain, are simply watchers and don’t actually understand the lived experience and therefore shouldn’t make their own assumptions. That’s my interpretation though!

[drifting mountain]

thank you! i kinda intended it to mean that these watchers are the main characters and protected by the plot, unlike me who is hated for suffering what the plot assigned me

but this is a great interpretation

[cold geyser]

Oh, that’s amazing! The plot being a metaphor for life and feeling “unlucky”? Simply dealing with the cards you were given?

[drifting mountain]

yep

im blamed for existing haha

[cold geyser]

nothing wrong with excising though

[drifting mountain]

oh you havn't seen my sin haha

im too sinful for this world

noone likes me after seeing me haha

but i must smile

otherwise the viewers shall b disappointed even if they never cared

[drifting mountain]

@balmy warren

here the poem u just commented on

[balmy warren]

Really strong and it made me kinda feel mad at unfair people. this is really powerful however you got abit of typos. but all that aside. this is pretty great

this gets a 9/10

[drifting mountain]

:3

[drifting mountain]

this world is cruel it scripted me as the villain