Will you stay for awhile?

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https://tenor.com/view/my-honest-reaction-honest-reaction-skull-skeleton-gif-7769318199696770420

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@topaz mason @ember pawn

[blissful cipher]

is that good or..?

@stable flume

[kind ridge]

bro lwk going crazy w the poetry nowadays
went from having literally nothing at all to a poem/2 poems every single day

wth is this creative burst

[blissful cipher]

I'm a complete mess 🙃

[blissful cipher]

no idea-

@finite mauve

[ember pawn]

It's really beautiful, like a hand reaching out asking for something that will get them out of the darkness, desperately

[queen island]

Wonderful! @ember pawn has just progressed to level 5!

[stable flume]

Felt the rhythm.
Finely written lyric.
Fits to be musical
Forever, write like this.

As always... Happy writing!
(you got the gist, bro!)

Try different themes too.

[velvet escarp]

aghahgahghagh this is so good

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@west field @pastel bane

[blissful cipher]

thank you so muchhh

[blissful cipher]

thanks to you thank you for inspiring me earlier today and yes sir

🫡

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yesh

[blissful cipher]

thank you I'm glad you like it

@fair mist

[manic pollen]

this is a good read
like the use of repetition, small yet powerful

[strong portal]

Damm, its goodddd !!!!

[blissful cipher]

thank you so muchhh

[blissful cipher]

thank you so glad you like it

🥹

@topaz sable

[ripe raptor]

stop breaking my heart with these poems💔💔

[blissful cipher]

[topaz sable]

Will you stay for awhile?
When each step feels like a dive-
A dive into fire, where souls burn alive

Will you stay for awhile?
When each step feels like a dive-
A dive into fire, where souls burn alive

i like the repetition in this, the want for comfort for assurance for love

this is really good

theres this musicality to this too which i really like

but oh man the emotions the message the ache

makes one want to say "please stay"

gosh to love and be loved without ever having to feel the want or need to ask such questions

[fair mist]

oooooo
love the language here, veru subtle :3
and the repetition is gooob, been a while since i read anything like this
not dramatic or loud
loved it void ladyy

suggestion:
i think in stanza 3

A dive into fire, where souls burn alive might feel a bit abrupt compared to the subtlety in the rest of the poem 🤔
how about
each step a dive into fire--where silence sears and hearts conspire [just an example, just to keep the language poetic while maintaining intensity... yk what i mean here]

and i think you can experiment a lil at the end here

like a variation with question, something subtly shifts
for example:
so tell me--will you stay for awhile?
or perhaps
even then, will you stay?

[blissful cipher]

firstly thank you so so sooo much for .. that hehe I'm so glad you felt it it was supposed to leave that effect and the ache is true this is someone begging someone to stay alive even when the rough times feel hard to the point it makes them feel like life should end like there's no point to live and suicides increase a lot which is sad so to whoever is having a hard time I hope they see this and feel it also I wanted to ask how do u dat thingy

[blissful cipher]

dis thingt

thingy

[topaz sable]

you use this character >

boop

[blissful cipher]

thank youuuu a lotttt and true that suggestion would make it intense thanks for the tips too they're really helpful I'll try it sometime

[blissful cipher]

uh

OH YHHH

thanksssss

[topaz sable]

anytime

[blissful cipher]

@sand summit @fading dock

[sand summit]

*Will you stay for awhile?
For the silent prayers and whispered dreams-
For the little light that shines and cuts the screams. *

this stanza hits personally, and the repetition along with the para you wrote underneath, i might have needed that, Thankss!!! i uhh appreciate it

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[sand summit]

AHHHHHH YOURE "NOBODY"

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I kept changing it today hehe yeap

[sand summit]

thanks for the poem!

[blissful cipher]

don't mention ittt

[blissful cipher]

thanks for giving it a chanceeee

[sand summit]

This poem deserves an audience.

and more than that, the audience needs this poem.

[blissful cipher]

thanksss I wanna ping ppl but then they be busy and I don't wanna bother them-

hesitationnnn

[blissful cipher]

I thought most people would prolly js brush this off

😶

thanks a lot for the kind words

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[sand summit]

check this out and tell me this is not what we needed-

[sand summit]

for me personally, i needed smth like this 😭 i dont care much about peoples thoughts, and you shouldnt, its your art, and diff people gon have diff opinion, what we can do is take the best from those and improve, while keeping our uniqueness-

[blissful cipher]

that was the entire reason I wrote this cuz the suicide thing bothers me sooooo much and thank you so much true I shouldn't worry about others thoughts and again.. I seriously can't express how thankful I am really..

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this is my thank you

[sand summit]

awwwwwwwwwwwwww

welcomee!!

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@terse aspen @fleet cloak
sorry for pinging but can you give feedback or just leave your opinion?

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@daring rampart @neon shore @lean arrow

[fleet cloak]

sure!!

this is honestly such a sweet poem and the beautiful message at the end really made my day— thank you so much for being such a kind person. And as for the poem, I love how you detail the difficulty of life but you still have that overlying question of “Will you stay for awhile?” It’s so sentimental and it really conveys such an important message!!

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[blissful cipher]

and thank you for reading thisss

@muted quest

[terse aspen]

Yeah!!!

I love this

[terse aspen]

The we you make the reader feel like they are the only thing that matter here is beautiful

[blissful cipher]

I was waiting thinking you had a lot more to say

👀

and thank you so much and y'all do matterrr

it's a reminder

[terse aspen]

Lmao I’m trying to word it

[blissful cipher]

you can do ittt and take ur time

I struggle with that so often

🙃

[terse aspen]

It reminds me of this poem I read for school a few days ago but I can’t remember the name

But I love this more cause the message and emotions are way more personal

[blissful cipher]

oooo what was it about if you don't mind me asking

and again thank youu

[terse aspen]

I think it was called Harlem it asks questions in a similar way but it was more about a what happens to a passed down dream

Yeah Harlem by Langston hughs

[blissful cipher]

on my way to search

found ittt

[terse aspen]

Nice

[queen island]

Wonderful! @terse aspen has just progressed to level 1!

[terse aspen]

Tell me what you think most my class actually didn’t like

[blissful cipher]

it's fun to read

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WHAAAAAA

[terse aspen]

That’s what I’m saying

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I could read it for hours

[blissful cipher]

RIGHT THEY DON'T KNOW GOOD POETREH

pspspspsp

[terse aspen]

Exactly not many people are into poetry these days so I was so happy when I found this community of people

I sounded so old 😭

I promise I’m not old

[blissful cipher]

true I love it here the ppl are sooo sweet and wow js their artttt I wanna marry em (their art)

[blissful cipher]

haha dude if u knew what I was gonna day

say

I was gonna say kids these days be into brainrot and ai

and addicted to their devices

[terse aspen]

NO BUT THEY ARE

[blissful cipher]

but honestly js unhealthy the device thing and ai and brainrot is bad bad

[blissful cipher]

THANK YOU RIGHT

they need some fresh air

LIKE SERIOUSLY IT'S SO NICE JS GOING OUT FOR A WALK LATE AT NIGHT (me who never got to)

it's a dream 🤧

[terse aspen]

Highly recommend

Gotta find a clear night so you can double down and star gaze

[blissful cipher]

yeappp or like js imagine midnight drives ahhhhhh dies

[terse aspen]

YESSSSSSS

that’s honestly the best way to get idea flowing

[blissful cipher]

STAR GAZING TOO?? DUDE U COOL (I do it at home a lot bc from the balcony I see soo sooo many js wooowww I love it I see shapes too)

I DOWNLOADED A BOOK JS FOR THAT a book about stars

and the shapes and all

[blissful cipher]

tell me about it

[terse aspen]

A few months ago there was this blood moon with 0 clouds in the sky and I saw so many constellations

[blissful cipher]

PLEASE TELL ME U TOOK A PICTURE

🤧

beautifullllll

[terse aspen]

I did lmao but it’s very bad I’ll look for it

[blissful cipher]

I don't mind I need to seeee cuz whaaa and u saw it with UR OWN EYES luckeyyyy and thanksss tell me if u find it

BTW

that reminds me

there's this poem this dude wrote abt talking with the moon it's pretty cool

[queen island]

Wonderful! @blissful cipher has just progressed to level 20!

[dawn sandal]

*there's this poem this dude

wrote abt talking with the

moon it's pretty cool*

- bdjkcuqvowibq

[blissful cipher]

u might like it

I think u will

[terse aspen]

What’s it called

[terse aspen]

I’m a sucker for a poem about the moon lol

[blissful cipher]

I tagged u

tea with the moon

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👀

dude is definitely cool

[blissful cipher]

WHAAAAAAAAA
faints from the beauty and dies

steals them
THANK
YOU
SO
VERY
MUCH

[terse aspen]

That was so beautiful

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@signal sorrel

[sonic wasp]

You wrote this or used any tool?

[blissful cipher]

all me-

why..?

also I'd like to read ur poems if u posted any

[daring rampart]

Boom! This is cute, well done! And cute not in a demeaning way, this is lovely. This is like, polished too

[blissful cipher]

lolz thanksss I get what you mean dw glad you like it

@fickle wigeon hi hi will you read this poem and just leave ur opinion?

@remote fox long time no see wanna read this?

and how's life

[fickle wigeon]

Okayyyyss

[fickle wigeon]

how are u doing

THAT;S LIKE MY CONDITION RIGHT NOW

[blissful cipher]

honestly idk so poetry has been helping

[blissful cipher]

relatable-

hope things get better for you!!

[fickle wigeon]

poetry helped me too 🫂

[fickle wigeon]

YESS VERY MUCH , LIKE WLL YOU STAY AFTER I SHOW YOU YOU THE CRACKED GLASS IN MY HEART OR THE CRACKED VOICE IN THE NIGHT SKIES

[fickle wigeon]

Thanks and same for you too

[blissful cipher]

TRUEHHHH

that's why most ppl hide and then ppl ask why

bc most times they aren't ready for the mess

[fickle wigeon]

yeah , that's true we poets are just best at hiding

[fickle wigeon]

hmm , what will people say and talk about us

[blissful cipher]

lolz yeap but everyone is imo I feel like they have their big secret battles that's a mess too it might be so bad they can't utter a word about it

[fickle wigeon]

by the way bro do you like know me ?

[fickle wigeon]

hm i see people so happy but with so much dark back stories

[blissful cipher]

hmmm I see I see.. an amazing poet and a beautiful soul aha I know you the dude that saved whaless.. (Idk what I'm doing idk you but hey I'm open to being friends and reading poems)

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[blissful cipher]

no idea- wot we talking about..?

huh

[blissful cipher]

E X A C T L Y

that's how crazy it is

I know some people who can put up the most real lookin smile and it's completely forced but not really bc it's like nth to them through pain they smile like it's nth

they are real heros

[blissful cipher]

don't mind me I'm super random sometimes..

😭😭😭

@waxen vortex

heyaaa wanna read this and leave ur opinion..?

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@wet sierra

[waxen vortex]

Of course :)

It's sooo beautiful

I feel like there could be more of a conclusion tho

[paper jewel]

Aw this poem is just

idk how to say it

But I’m someone who begged someone to stay once n

Hehe this sure as hell just hit me

you really are great at writing

I rarely appreciate poems but whenever I read yours

I can’t criticise idk why they r just soo gooddd

[blissful cipher]

please go on- I'd love to hear and thank youu

[blissful cipher]

I'm someone who doesn't even know how to ask for help-

[blissful cipher]

lolz I'm glad my poems can do that and thanks u too I learn it here how to get better at writing

[blissful cipher]

thankssss again

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ヽ つ＼ ／
UU / 🎀 \

[paper jewel]

it’s okay

I promise I’ll be there for you if you ever need me and you can always dm me whenever you feel low…

[paper jewel]

DONT THANK ME

I BONK YOU

[blissful cipher]

that means a lot really

[fickle wigeon]

THANKSS , YOU ARE BASICALLY MY FIRST FRIEND ON THIS SERVERRR

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[fickle wigeon]

like when someone opes up to others it creats anxiety

[fickle wigeon]

yesssss

[blissful cipher]

cmonnnnm dude can't learn how to accept it ima teach u kid it's pretty simple so u say okay welcome as a reply yeah? try it sometime

[blissful cipher]

I thought I was creeping u out or smth haha thank you tooo

[fickle wigeon]

🫂 nahh

[blissful cipher]

I rarely get that I talk to strangers like I already know them hehe.. I'm totally normal.. cough cough

[paper jewel]

No no I won’t accept thank you’s when I just say the truth

If I ever do smthing in ur life that helps you, thank me then

Not nowww

[queen island]

Wonderful! @paper jewel has just progressed to level 21!

[waxen vortex]

Oh yeah sorry

uh

It feels like it ends too abruptly

imo

[fickle wigeon]

haha loll

[waxen vortex]

So I think another stanza to like wrap it up would be cool

[blissful cipher]

ur poems diddd so I did now.. and I'll thank you later too

[blissful cipher]

YEAHHH bc this dude actually gave me some advice like not too long not too short so I listened to that and made this short thingy

[fickle wigeon]

btw @waxen vortex @blissful cipher You guys are from college or high school ?

[blissful cipher]

oooo I'll think about it if I get time

[blissful cipher]

hehehe

[blissful cipher]

uhh tenth grade so high school..?

[fickle wigeon]

11th

[waxen vortex]

Short and sweet :)

[waxen vortex]

None of the above

[fickle wigeon]

older ?

[blissful cipher]

ooo is it tough? I ain't even gonna do that

[waxen vortex]

8th :)

[blissful cipher]

can't wait to finish

[fickle wigeon]

nios ?

[blissful cipher]

oooo kid enjoy ur life

[fickle wigeon]

🫂

I WISH I COULD BE IN 8TH AGAIN

I COULD CHANGE EVERYTHINGGG

[blissful cipher]

like you

[waxen vortex]

ok

[fickle wigeon]

[blissful cipher]

I mean if you're short that is

[waxen vortex]

alright I see how it is

lol

[blissful cipher]

lolz some things are meant to be

[fickle wigeon]

HAINA , but if only we knew that what's coming next , we'd do everything to avoid it

I lost like so many connections , friends , and childhood and half of teenage

[blissful cipher]

but that's the thing.. like honestly think about it.. if you knew how can you actually learn..?

[fickle wigeon]

@waxen vortex Kid don't be like me

[blissful cipher]

life changes.. it's okay.. it's because its best for you

[blissful cipher]

nothing wrong with youuu

[fickle wigeon]

so you are in 10th ?

[blissful cipher]

why..? and yeah

also

I want to say this

[fickle wigeon]

hm

[fickle wigeon]

nicee take care mann

[waxen vortex]

You're only like three years older than me 😭

[fickle wigeon]

I lost everything in 3 years bro

[blissful cipher]

what if what the future holds is something so good it makes you change makes you think you're better and you don't have to work that can happen too and if it was another big battle it might break you maybe you never know it's all perfect timing and sometimes you just have to learn it the scary way but that's how we learn

[waxen vortex]

woah paragraph

[blissful cipher]

I already am doing great hehe u toooo

[fickle wigeon]

i've wrote a poem about it , purpose should i send

[blissful cipher]

you're still here.. meaning you didn't

[blissful cipher]

def should

[waxen vortex]

wait have I not followed you yet

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[blissful cipher]

gurl I've been meaning to say I love love love your creativity

[dawn sandal]

*gurl I've been meaning

to say I love love love your

creativity*

- bdjkcuqvowibq

[blissful cipher]

also thanks for following me

[waxen vortex]

No problemo

[waxen vortex]

Thank you

[wet sierra]

That's actually so good, the rhymes really go with the rhythm, keep it up :3

[blissful cipher]

awh thank you so very muchhh

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[blissful cipher]

@wet sierra as salaam alaikum ukhtiii nice to meet you wanna read this poem and leave some feedback or your thoughts..?

[wet sierra]

Ofccccc

W/alaykum asalaaam

HIW do I read it there’s so many replies😭

‘When it feels like love is dying-
And even the moon is hiding’
Hittttttttt this is a really lovely poem and could be a flashback of ppl who didn’t stay and left emotional scars

[velvet escarp]

How in the world do you get so many replies and reaction 😭😭😭

[blissful cipher]

sorryyy gurl I'm tryna pin it how do I do it I sent the text again and tried to pin it didn't work so deleted it

[blissful cipher]

yeah for those I'm sorry may they rest in peace and I hope the others heal

and thank you so much for the lovely words

💗

[blissful cipher]

idkkk ¯_(ツ)_/¯ btw do you know how to pin text or is it even possible here

[wet sierra]

No problemmmm

[blissful cipher]

@orchid mural heyaaa ma sistaaa how u doinn and.. wanna read ma poem..?

.

replying to my own poem so no one has to scroll through..

[velvet escarp]

You need to be a mod

[blissful cipher]

huh-

hehe wot..

and thanksss but I don't think so

[velvet escarp]

To pin text

[blissful cipher]

ouh sucks btw tag me in ur powms

poems

I feel like reading smth

[velvet escarp]

I haven't posted one in a bit, I don't get hardly any replies and comments

[blissful cipher]

whaaaaaaa

that's sad

ping me in all ur poems

I'll try to read them all though I can't promise I'll be able to but I'll try

is there any I didn't read yet

??

[velvet escarp]

I'm not sure

[blissful cipher]

ima check-

[wet sierra]

Same😭🙏

[blissful cipher]

tag meh-

[wet sierra]

Will dooo

[manic pollen]

relatable

[orchid mural]

Ofc!

@blissful cipher woah-
For silent prayer and wispered dreams
For the little light that shines and cuts the screams 💕

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[velvet escarp]

omg how do you get so many followersss ;-;

[neon shore]

"when each moment feels like a silent duel" omg silent duel... is like the perfect metaphor for invisible battles. no one sees the swords, but you feel the cuts🥹 so relatable. and the note wrecks me, is like ur raw, unpolished postscript is the real poem here🥹 "i care about you just because you’re another human" this is the simplest n truest reason to stay. no platitudes just hands reaching😭

[blissful cipher]

why thank youuu so how's my fav poet doinnn

[orchid mural]

Aww thank you I’m doing well

[blissful cipher]

awhhh thank youuu and trueee that's the only thing that matters we should all help not js for smth in return or anything js bc the other has a heart

[blissful cipher]

I'm gladdd love ur poemsss

[orchid mural]

Thank you so much!💕 I got some new one’s cooking up

[blissful cipher]

ooooo can't wait to check themmm I'll be waiting

[blissful cipher]

@waxen vortex
hii so I added a last stanza.. what do you think

[blissful cipher]

@gritty sun hi hii you seemed cool js by your bio and name.. miss awesome will you give my poetry a chance? (if you want I'd love to read ur poems too though I'm no expert on poetry)

[gritty sun]

okayy

[blissful cipher]

she flash-

[gritty sun]

i rlly like ur poem

[blissful cipher]

awh thanks- u read super fast or..?

cuz wow-

[gritty sun]

yes

speed read

[blissful cipher]

whaaa someone read books?

[gritty sun]

a lot

ill send u on 2 of my work

[blissful cipher]

I've figured tell me your favsss

[blissful cipher]

yeshhh

thanksss

[gritty sun]

ive resd gifts differing by isabel myres briggs

and the dsm 5

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@blissful cipher is now following @gritty sun.

[blissful cipher]

ooo will check them out when I cannn

[gritty sun]

theyre both on psych

[gritty sun]

if you wnat a fiction book i reccommend the giver

[blissful cipher]

psychology?? count me innn I love love love that

[blissful cipher]

definitely adding to my never ending list of books to read lolz

[gritty sun]

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ru8aeAz9_EJZGMfpOEsRyallgjT4lJOU/view?pli=1

gifts differing ^^^

[blissful cipher]

GURL I HAVE THATTT WHAAAA

I READ SOME PARTSSS

[gritty sun]

WHA-

OMLL

[blissful cipher]

BEEN SO BUSY I HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE TO FINISH IY

IY

IT

OMG WHAT'S UR MBTI

[gritty sun]

NOOO
NOO

[blissful cipher]

GURL BE MA FRIEND

[gritty sun]

i read it when i was 12

[blissful cipher]

woahhhhh

gurl ahead of me lolz can't wait to read it stilllll

[gritty sun]

intp

[blissful cipher]

so so so so so so sorry gtg will text another timeeee

[gritty sun]

freind my alt > self.procalimed.philomath

[blissful cipher]

also thanks for the lovely talk

[blissful cipher]

whaaa I'm enfp-a and sorry for the late reply ma days got busy hehe

[blissful cipher]

sure hey um ur alt miss perfect will u give me the chance to be someone that gets to call you a friend? (am I doing this right or..?)

[gritty sun]

okay just know i have school and other stuff so i wont be on a lot

[blissful cipher]

gurll dw I relate we all have a lifeee so it's alright plus my big exams are near so yeah.. also hope your day or night is greattt

[blissful cipher]

Will you stay for awhile?
Even when the world is harsh and cruel-
When each moment feels like a silent duel.

Will you stay for awhile?
For the silent prayers and whispered dreams-
For the little light that shines and cuts the screams.

Will you stay for awhile?
When each step feels like a dive-
A dive into fire, where souls burn alive.

Will you stay for awhile?
When it feels like love is dying-
And even the moon is hiding.

Will you stay for awhile?
Even if it feels like hope has runaway-
And I'm gone the next day?

@whole hornet

(yeah that'll be it hehe sorry)

[whole hornet]

I’ll go resd! Them soon

[blissful cipher]

thank youuu 💗