this is really great. correct me if im wrong, but it seems as though you intended for the first 3 paragraphs to feel like theyre almost bathed in sunlight. Then, the fourth paragraph, feels like a plunge into deep cold water, and the reader is instantly pulled back out into sunshine in the subsequent paragraph
#Toe Biter
marsh crescent
like a very fleeting but intense shift in whose perspective we are viewing the world in
marsh crescent
like a very fleeting but intense shift in whose perspective we are viewing the w...
this carries over to the way that any hostile thought is very rapid and short
is that so
Ive been inactive on this server for months. The first poem i get back to is on bitten toes
fingers perhaps? im fine as we are