Running | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

obtuse valve Jul 22, 2025, 6:17 PM

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I run to you from me
The grass flows by my sides,
then sudden collapse into embrace
An anime spiraling in sunlight
and flowers all around us

I sit up in bed
and a silent clock projects
its numbers on my heart

I breathe the lack of light
and dread

Run you did, run away from me
And while into a run I stumble,
I stitch my side until I hold

The grass is grey
Withered flowers in the cold

quiet galleonBOT Jul 22, 2025, 6:18 PM

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wet snow Jul 22, 2025, 6:20 PM

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I love sad poem, let’s read it :D

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obtuse valve Jul 22, 2025, 6:37 PM

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wet snow I love sad poem, let’s read it :D

any feedback is welcome!

delicate moss Jul 23, 2025, 3:09 AM

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I sit up in bed
and a silent clock projects
its numbers on my heart

wow thats nice

obtuse valve Jul 23, 2025, 10:11 AM

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delicate moss I sit up in bed and a silent clock projects its numbers on my heart wow thats...

thank you!

obtuse valve Jul 23, 2025, 2:40 PM

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thank you so much, that is so very sweet of you to say!

random wind Jul 26, 2025, 12:57 AM

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My comment keeps getting deleted, here is a screenshot of it

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obtuse valve Jul 26, 2025, 8:29 AM

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thank you so much! i will look for places for commas! i know stitch my side is odd but it was deliberately supposed to be about the stitches you get when running and patching yourself up to go on

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the last stanza is supposed to reflect the first and be a state of mind in the present rather than a dream.. i am staring at the third stanzas grammar now!

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