"Soul Cleaner" | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

mellow marsh Jul 18, 2025, 1:46 AM

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<@&1144090752457113794> <@&1145760802666717234> uhhhh

chrome arrow Jul 18, 2025, 2:02 AM

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Alright, I like the idea of this one, what are you going for in terms of poetry? Like what is it to you?

mellow marsh Jul 18, 2025, 2:02 AM

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chrome arrow Alright, I like the idea of this one, what are you going for in terms of poetry?...

It's about a person

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That makes me feel seen

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and shows me what I deserrve

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deserve

chrome arrow Jul 18, 2025, 2:03 AM

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Yes bit poetry itself,
Form of relief?
Do you want a rhyme scheme?
Do you want to keep a certain mood?

Etc yk?

mellow marsh Jul 18, 2025, 2:03 AM

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Like the idea is that xyz comes into my life in a dark moment when my heart feels unseen and when I think I dont deserve kindness and it shows me what I truly deserve

mellow marsh Jul 18, 2025, 2:03 AM

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chrome arrow Yes bit poetry itself, Form of relief? Do you want a rhyme scheme? Do you want t...

I tried to go for a bit of rhyme without overdoing it

mellow marsh Jul 18, 2025, 2:04 AM

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mellow marsh Like the idea is that xyz comes into my life in a dark moment when my heart feel...

like cleans my soul from the mess yk

chrome arrow Jul 18, 2025, 2:04 AM

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Ah I see, well, in case yoy did not already know this, and if you do then thats awsome too, that there are different types of writing methods to tune up the beat you know?

mellow marsh Jul 18, 2025, 2:05 AM

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oh i didnt know

latent otterBOT Jul 18, 2025, 2:05 AM

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mellow marsh oh i didnt know

Wonderful! @mellow marsh has just progressed to level 1!

mellow marsh Jul 18, 2025, 2:05 AM

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its the second thing i wrote or well

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started writing

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with 0 past experience

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whatsoever

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in anything related

chrome arrow Jul 18, 2025, 2:06 AM

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No worries at all you are still learning, everyone is

mellow marsh Jul 18, 2025, 2:06 AM

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its actually a poem meant for specific person

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so im trying to uhh

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make it not-so-corny

chrome arrow Jul 18, 2025, 2:08 AM

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Yeah I got that, wrote a song to a girl once haha

mellow marsh Jul 18, 2025, 2:08 AM

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i feel like windows would shatter if i tried to sing

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so went for poems instead

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i mean she did tell me my voice is soothing etc. which is something ive never heard and uh

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she just

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appreciates the little and big things about me

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and since she's bit of a poet herself i thought i'd try for her

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just wlw things 😔

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appreciate your input though

#"Soul Cleaner"