my first poem so it's not good but uh
#(It's bad) "For You"
quasi cedar
devout grove
I feel like you could add a little more to it, I love this one though. Not as in words but maybe a description, the who the person is? Like silhouette almost, or like why you would steal the stars for them, or what do they fear? Maybe explore a little deaper into yourself, think out loud ask some questions, for just starting this is great keep going 👍
But most importantly I believe you should change the name of this post to just "For You" bc poems aren't about some sort of rhyme or getting it right, its about what you like,
And its not bad
quasi cedar
But most importantly I believe you should change the name of this post to just "...
I haven't really had any idea for the title
quasi cedar
I feel like you could add a little more to it, I love this one though. Not as in...
It's lowkey my first poem I ever wrote on my own and uh
I dunno
devout grove
I haven't really had any idea for the title
Im talking about taking out the
(Its bad)
quasi cedar
can you elaborate its 4 am my brain is barely braining
devout grove
#1395575945586544661
(It's bad) "For You"
Instead,
#1395575945586544661
"For You"
quasi cedar
Oh oh
the
(It's bad)
was
a note
for the
forum
the title is "For You" even though it sucks
perhaps i could title it uhhh
"Star Taker"
does that make
sense in english
it's not my first language
😭 🙏
devout grove
No worries at all friend, yes that works
waxen atlasBOT
No worries at all friend, yes that works
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quasi cedar
No worries at all friend, yes that works
appreciate it
devout grove
Any time
devout grove
Yeah