That’s Just The Game (Not Finished Yet) | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

torn river Jul 17, 2025, 10:30 PM

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BANG and I’m back in the game , the horses stride and I obey, the crowd cheers hooray as I slide into first place. Cracking the whip, my heart skipping a beat.

Crash and I dash towards the finish line
Pop and I stop, gliding through reality

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@lofty dawn

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lofty dawn Jul 17, 2025, 10:31 PM

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Ooo fun one! It really gives off music vibe in a way? Did you write it as a song?

torn river Jul 17, 2025, 10:32 PM

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I tried to write it almost as a chant I guess to mimic how the crowd would be like

lofty dawn Jul 17, 2025, 10:32 PM

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torn river I tried to write it almost as a chant I guess to mimic how the crowd would be li...

Ooo I see...that's pretty fun, I love the vibe

torn river Jul 17, 2025, 10:32 PM

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lofty dawn Ooo I see...that's pretty fun, I love the vibe

Thank you I’m excited to see where it goes

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