False Light, True End

[gaunt kindle]

Thou, the time is vast.
What's gone won't come back.
Life is bright—or so it seems so.
What about the truth you can't see?
Just like the particles we are made of,
The truth has been concealed,
By the false light of life.
The facade of all happiness,
The wish of living forever—
This seems all good till u face an immortal.
That's the point of singularity.
That's when every thought becomes one.
Both sides of the coin can be seen.
What's hidden from eyes can be seen.
The truth starts to come up.
Standing face to face, you realize:
Life... ahh... life, all a lie.
These beautiful lies blinded me throughout my life.
The wish of everlasting—I guess everyone is dumb once.
Now that it's all clear,
I wait for the end.
Maybe it's too close or too far.
Just like everything in this universe:
What you can see can't be reached.
What you can reach can't be touched.
Now I wait... and I wait... and will keep waiting
To meet the one who never lied.
My true friend—
The one who was always shown as darkness.
But in darkness, I found truth.
Now I wait for you, my friend.
What's taking you so long?
This life has been too cruel.
I am sorry that I despised you.
And it's your right not to come to me.
But I apologize—I was blinded.
I was blinded by the lies of this false world.
I sit at the edge of a cliff, remembering my past.
The life—or should I say, lies—are all over.
Now I await you.
And when death comes, I will say:
"What took you so long, sire?"

[chrome talon]

Your poem hit deep. It feels like a conversation with truth itself raw, reflective, and painfully honest. I loved how you took something as dark as death and turned it into a symbol of clarity and peace. The last line gave me chills. Beautiful work.

[chrome talon]

@gaunt kindle

[gaunt kindle]

Thanks for this wonderful comment. I am glad to be able to express what I feel. And that you were able to understand it

[chrome talon]

A living soul knows the value of his words

[gaunt kindle]

That's the beauty of it

[chrome talon]

But does the poet knows weather his soul is dead or alive

[gaunt kindle]

The soul has been dead for a while. But the body is alive. Soul craves the arrival of death. Body craves the lies of world

[chrome talon]

If the poet is aware of the death of his soul and its desire then the poet must also be aware of his own identity, his own theyself

[gaunt kindle]

The identity is lost, lost in the never ending facade of world. Trying to find the path to the truth and deep understanding of nature

[chrome talon]

I am not surprised to know that because not everyone knows what is thyself, you want find your lost identity but not your thyself

[icy cloud]

Wonderful! @chrome talon has just progressed to level 4!

[chrome talon]

One day you'll find your identity but I can't say that you'll find your thyself

[gaunt kindle]

Myself isn't supposed to be found, a meaningless useless self. The soul is what needs to reawakened but maybe it has found the purpose. Maybe meeting death is the goal

[icy cloud]

Wonderful! @gaunt kindle has just progressed to level 6!

[gaunt kindle]

@chrome talon

[chrome talon]

every soul will one day die for sure
but if you can't know you thyself
you can't see the god
what a pitiful life it is
what a pitiful person he is
who didn't rose him self to the level
to stare in the eyes of god asking about his future

[gaunt kindle]

The soul who foresaw the lies behind the cruelty tyrant of life
In the face of beauty and light
The facade it was able to foresee.
That soul is far above then what normal can even think to achieve.
Stand Infront of god to ask such question.
Nah... That right has to be begged to get from me

[chrome talon]

As I said young man and as you told, a dead soul can't understand what a living soul sees

[gaunt kindle]

But a soul dies when he knows what a living soul doesn't

[chrome talon]

Dead soul is dead it doesn't even dares to stand in front of a living soul

A living soul experiences different deaths of different type of souls, where as the dead soul only knows about the after life but the living soul doesn't care of the heavens and the hells, he craves to see the God itself

[icy cloud]

Wonderful! @chrome talon has just progressed to level 5!

[gaunt kindle]

A living soul can't comprehend what a dead soul can do.
The one who can stand Infront of death call it's friend rather than a foe. Is above all

[gaunt kindle]

God... A dead soul has accomplished the test of the god

[chrome talon]

Where the dead souls experiences punishment of hell and the rewards of heavens and calls death its friend. The living soul talks to God and loves him more then he last did and sees the death an obstetrical blocking the way to meet the God and to get its glance

[sage sparrow]

3rd line: "so it seems so" is a lil wrong moi think

[gaunt kindle]

Maybe you don't understand. The concept of dead soul and living body.
Is someone that still suffers and fights with knowledge of far above anything living

[chrome talon]

I am not talking about the test I am talking about the true appearance of God his beauty, my soul doesn't care of the rest it craves to see the God in his true self

[gaunt kindle]

In what context

[chrome talon]

to whom are you saying this?

[gaunt kindle]

No one can finally see the beauty of god unless he accepts death as it's friend

[sage sparrow]

Grammar

Cauz

So

[gaunt kindle]

Ohh ok

[sage sparrow]

Put it simply

"So" usually is used once in a sentence

[chrome talon]

Death was never meant to be friends with it was made to scare of those who weren't loyal to him

[sage sparrow]

But dat aside

The poem is very philosophcal

[gaunt kindle]

Death was and always be a true friend.
Life is lie
Death is truth
Life will end yet shows it will never end
Death never lies

[gaunt kindle]

Thanks alot.

[chrome talon]

Franz Kafka or Nietzsche?

I am amazed that how you think as a dead soul

[gaunt kindle]

Prefer Kafka. But I like both

I maybe the odd one who thinks death as a friend and life a lie

[chrome talon]

I had a good experience with you

[chrome talon]

You read them?

[gaunt kindle]

Not properly but here and there random quotes and stuff

[gaunt kindle]

Same it was very good

[chrome talon]

others may think the same but they will not be found on discord but they would be sleeping as the sleep is the young sister of death

[chrome talon]

aaa that explains it, I assume that was the reason you were keeping up

[gaunt kindle]

I once made a joke.
Sleep is just death without premium. So you see adds aka dream and when trial period end you wake up xd

[gaunt kindle]

I myself had a lot of debates with me on this topic and come up to this conclusion

[chrome talon]

Nice to know

[chrome talon]

Do you self argue on your own philosophy?

[gaunt kindle]

Yeah whenever I come up with something new

[chrome talon]

I argue with my self every day

I remember a qoute of the poet of west

[gaunt kindle]

No one can beat you other than your own self

[chrome talon]

In every mind of a living thinker thoughts change if you don't change with them, then your not a human being but a stone

By Allama Iqbal

[chrome talon]

yes your right thats why it is worth it

[gaunt kindle]

Our national poet. He surely had a great way of philosophy

[chrome talon]

Just to beat you in this debate my last words "A dead soul can't cry because he already stopped feeling"

[chrome talon]

you from pakistan?

[gaunt kindle]

Yeah

[chrome talon]

Pari jaan

Muja laga koi anreez ka bacha ha

after knowing a man like Iqbal was you still let your soul be dead

[gaunt kindle]

Nah jani, Sirf angreez thodiy kar saktai hain yah sab

[chrome talon]

baat tu sai ha unma imman hi nhi

exmas ka result ki sunao

[gaunt kindle]

Maybe our philosophy may differ but the end is same. His philosophy was to awaken people. Mine is to show the truth

[gaunt kindle]

Sarkar Meri to uni hai

[chrome talon]

And I just want to see Allah and then keep seeing it until the after life also hits its end

[chrome talon]

Bach gaya bachra

[gaunt kindle]

Well, that's only achievable when u are happy to meet death

[gaunt kindle]

In sab sai guzar jo Chuka houn

[chrome talon]

yes sir

[chrome talon]

I found a real dead soul in this server

never mind that

[gaunt kindle]

Haha facts

[chrome talon]

aaa now I'll get going

I have to pray isha too