Love-a poem on the good and bad sides of it.

[fair kernel]

Love..such an intricate..at times heartbreaking..and yet such a beautiful, beautiful feeling
the warm,fuzzy feeling you get when u hug your best friend in what felt like forever
that feeling you get having a warm meal after a long day
the feeling you get when you finally drink some cold water after being in the sun for so long
that feeling you get when u put on your favourite cardigan when it's really cold outside
that feeling you get when you cuddle a pet
that feeling you get when the morning sun hits your face and makes you smile
and yet it's the same feeling that makes you cry so much your chest hurts
its the same feeling that makes you cry until it's hard to breathe
its the same feeling that makes you lose your sleep
its the same feeling that makes you scared to feel
it makes you want to stop wearing your heart on your sleeve
and yet no matter how much it hurts
we all still fall in love
because we all believe that there's light at the end of the tunnel.

[fair kernel]

@pearl pasture @boreal geyser @upper shuttle @quick nest lmk what yall think thankss

[pearl pasture]

arent these lovely warm imageries?? the rhythm is goob and the transition from warmth to heartbreak feels authentic and ending is just right on mark

some polishing:
replace .. with ... or use em dashes for pauses
example: Love… such an intricate—at times heartbreaking—and yet such a beautiful, beautiful feeling.

and i feel you can tighten your middle heartbreak section a lil with aligning

none the less loved reading it

[fair kernel]

Thank u smm😭✨

Ohh i understood now loll.. well maybe it aint for the weak hehe

[dusky delta]

*Ohh i understood

now loll.. well maybe it aint

for the weak hehe*

- k_liz.